If the dragon ladies are supposed to seem trustworthy, you really should have had them explain what joining their coalition entails. If they weren't, great job.

And so I find myself at the end of another one of your enthralling stories. I have to say I did enjoy the read and you definitely brought forth a powerful emotional reaction on my part...of course since it was a blinding white hot rage at how not a single human had the balls to stand up to Shego and call her on her half-limp argument about why we should bow before these new space overlords, or even just chastise the other reps for falling in line like lemmings about to leap off a cliff...
But, I still really liked the story, especially since it garnered that type of reaction from me...So thanks for that. :{)

-MDwoy- ...oddly enough another space lizard lol.

I've always really liked this one, so I just had to reread it. Still great fun. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Hahaha so I planned on powering through this and then reviewing at the end but I had to comment about Drakken's "escape" from the institution. Insane genius taking some chillax time in the psych ward just biding his time for his next scheme. Love this story and can't wait to finish :)

hi! i love this story in read it 5 times already it is the best.

Hi I have just finally got around to catching up and reading this story. I really really enjoyed it and regret not reading it sooner. I love the idea of the great lady and shegos role, this is one of you best stories, but then everything you write is good. So thank you again for a great read with well thought out original and imaginative chracters.

this must be my 4th re-read of this...and I finally twigged onto what bothered me about this chapter.

Lightspeed.

Im not talking about the ship they are on...advanced yadda yadda whatever warp dimensional something or another...dont care. Earth tech, even Lowardian Advanced Wade modified KP Universe tech, doesn't yet have faster than LS communication bands. The distances you are talking about...impossible. Even with a massively boosted signal, simple radio would have taken several hundred THOUSAND years to get back to earth.

Now...if you were to go back and edit it...ever so slightly...and call it "wades prototype subspace communication module". Well...that's something slightly different now isn't it.

It just needs a tiny bit more of an explanation. To the best of the represented knowledge of the AU in which you are writing, FTL com's dont exist. You really should either invent one for the AU...or in some way change/explain exactly how the signal managed to travel back to earth in a matter of...oh how about Instantly...which seems to be what is happening. Either that or the nukes threw Kim and Shego a few hundred thousand years in the past...which is why the signal times line up...That would make for some interesting inconsistencies later on in the storyline though.

Hmm, missed the ending of this fic, so I reread the whole thing. Still great. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

ok, FINALLY finished this one! its been in my inbox for over a MONTH!

Great story!

Great ending to a great story, and as always, open as a welcome gate (yes, I know, lousy comparison… it's late).

Kim saved Shego from a far worse enemy than they faced before. Good thing there are other people who like to face this enemy.

I wonder what will happen next. I noticed a sequel is already running, I will certainly read that one as well.

Keep up the very good writing that you do,

reader101w

Great chapter,

And Earth made a fist… I wonder how the aliens will like that.

So, Shego is maturing, I wonder how that will effect her relationship with KIm. And also if it will affect her brothers as well.

I hope to read the next chapter soon.

Keep up the very good writing tat you do,

reader101w

Nice chapter, cool fight.

I enjoyed the fact that Kim and Gyrzza didn't even put out a finger to help Shego because she should have known what was facing her.

So, Kim, Ron, Bonnie and Shego had their talk, and things seem to be smoothed over. Just in time for the next invasion.

Keep up the very good writing that you do,

reader101w

Cool chapter,

It seems like a lot of otherworldly assassins are out to get Shego, I wonder how this one will fare.

I hope to read the rest of the story soon.

Keep up the very good writing that you do,

reader101w

Ah you tricked us! thinking that was a huge invasion...ooh very sneak.

definitely liked the ending! but I'm SOOO Curious what this communion is that Kim received and what she can do now...

i'm thinking that there's a sequel coming on...ha ha