Lol nice little first chapter! The idea is really interesting... and its great that you use the japanese name and all... but I think you should put a translation in the beginning ... I know whos satoshi, kasumi and shigeru but not everyone does and that makes people lose interest sometimes... but this is a gift fic... so reviews dont really bother I thnk?

Takeshi? Im not one to like or support gymshippy... theyre too brotherly neways cant wait to see where youre going with this!

LOL loved all Satoshi knew all along Kasumi was spying back on him and all he was all in a fight with shigeru. Thats SOO like us.! :)

Well c ya!

michelicious

lol soo cute. I like ow you put Shigeru here.

Are you going to update or you have given up on it?

There will be more, won't there? *crosses fingers hopefully*

I really love how Shigeru and Satoshi will fight about _anything_... and I'm curious to see who Kasumi will be going to the dance with in the end. ::grins:: A really great start, though. I can just imagine how much Dana loved it. ::laughs::

Figures that THOSE two would find any excuse to argue who's better. But Takeshi? Why not Hiroshi? In my book he's alot nicer to show off.

Umm.. is there going to be more or is that all? It was kinda confusing.

All right, how should I start this? Oh yes! I know!

*squeals. LOUDLY. and glomps*

Oh, I love the beginning! This is going to be one of the best fanfics ever, I know it is. Er, so maybe that's a bit opinionated of me, but I really love the way the characters act, and what Shigeru and Satoshi did just to get a new excuse to argue... it's a very wonderful start, and I think I'll like that *certain* scene in two just as much as you.

*g-lommmm-pah!*