Please Make Another Chapter...
P.S these are really good stories)

I've stayed up all night reading your two Indiana Jones stories and I must say that I love them and I can't wait to read more!

Hi, again. So I was wondering if you could please update. I really want to know what is going to happen in chapter twelve.

Bye

Hi, again. So iwas wondering if you could please update. I really want to know what is going to happen in chapter twelve.

Bye

Hey I love your story and all the characters. I did find madie a but annoying at times in your last story but less in the sequel. I think you've written Indiana and Mutts characters perfectly and I find it funny how marion is the peacekeeper and keeps them both in their place
So please update soon ! Please I'll give you a cupcake
Scarlett Frost xx

I just started reading your story two days ago but I loved it. I'm egyptien so I have so comments on your story
1)"Femi and Alfie" are not arabic names at all. "Sallah" is.

2)Do you know that "Ramla" means "sand" in arabic ?

3)Cleopatra wasn't egyptien, yes she was a pharoe, but not egyptien.

4)Cairo and Alexandria has alot more to describe than "sand" and "desert".

5) You might need to put some arabic "talk" into your story, it will make look more real. So if you need any english-arabic translation I'd be very happy to help
PS: still loved your story (and the "key to pandora" one too)

Good six chapters _

Woohoo! Yet another great chapter!

I must admit that I'm silently hoping that Mutt accidentaly breaks the 'cat' while trying to save it... But this is your story, not mine! (Though I'm still hoping :P
Looking forward to the next chapter and I can't wait for the group to get back together again!

Keep writing, and I don't care how long it takes, as long as the next chapter's as good as the rest of them!

... Wow the review submitted itself before I was done... As I was saying I like how you made it a legitimate fear and not something silly. I can't wait to see how he overcomes it. Keep up the great work! And please update soon!

Hey! Awesome chapter. I meant to review this last week when I read it but life happened. Anyway this was great. I love how Maddie takes things into her own hands and doesn't wait around to be rescued. It shows what a strong individual she is. And poor Mutt. How could you not notice the two girls went missing? Oh well can't really blame. At least we finally understand why he isn't so touchy-feely

I love it, though I hope that we are getting to the part where Mutt saves Madie and everyone realizes that Femi is evil! Anyway, great job.

Encore un magnifique chapitre! J'adore
Elle a eue une très bonne idée Madie! J'espère qu'elle et Femi vont s'en sortir
You're welcome, if you are a problem with grammar French, i can help you ça veut dire quelque chose ce que j'ai écrit?
Vivement la suite!
Kiss

Yeh. Indy's dad is going to be in it! I love him. Madie's plan was smart but I hope they run back into Mutt and co. soon. Thanks for updating! Update again soon!

Can't wait to read the next chapter

Great chapter as always! I can't wait to see what happens to them next! Aw, thanks for commenting on me reviewing the IJ story you're betaing! I try to review every story I read and I'm in the process of writing an IJ story (MuttxOC) and I like to support every IJ story I read! I can't wait for the next chapter!