So yeah it was good to see that even though L/P are hanging out they cant ignore that Brooke is there. Lucas obviously still loves her and that is good to know. I noticed about the blond guy taking pictures, could it be "Peyton's brother"? lol Also I am glad that Dan is being haunted by the ghost of Keith or his own guilt really. Of course I am waiting for the moment in were Brooke tells Lucas she is pregnant. Maybe Mouth will help. lol. Ok well update soon)

Things really suck for brucas right mow well actually since the beginning. Brooke is still refusing to tell Luke the truth about the pregnancy and Lucas jut gave up on her. Worse thing he has ever said"Then I guess I was wrong. I'm not the guy for you, Brooke Davis
Everytime I see and here that line it just kills me because ugh I just hate it. Never thought I would hear those awful words again but I expected it since you're re working s4. but anyways another great chapter it just brings back some bad memories that's all.

Btw saw the trailer for "Good Behavior" and just wanted to let you know that your friend did an amazing job on it!
So yeah anyways update asap please!

PeytWHORE is SELFISH! Please update soo n

Yes so great update! Im wondering what Mouth will do with this information. And tell your friend Jess she did a wonderful job! Update soon)

Ooh the plot thickens! Mouth better mention what he heard to Lucas I mean if Brooke ain't saying something he better do it then. Thank you for the chapter and update soon please!

You know I have like a love/hate relationship with your story. I love it because I know where it's leafing up to and I hate it because it brings back horrible memories. I'm still going to be reading and hanging on to every second of it but still I really don't like reading some parts lol. So it was an amazing chapter although I hate how stupid Brooke and Luke are being so please update sooner!

That certain person finding out the truth better be Lucas!

Wonderful!

great update i wisch brooke tells lucas about the baby

Hey!Sorry for the late review but it's better late than never right? Well just wanna say how it must really suck to have to re-watch season 4 and i totally understand why you haven't updated in a while. I mean who would want to re-watch the season that killed your hopes in your favorite couple ever being together again? I know I wouldn't but anyways just saying here how much I really liked this chapter. I really hope you update soon so that you can get back to updating "Good behavior" soon.

Sad for Brucas I wish Luke would have seen Brooke at the mall but oh well things happen for a reason. But anyways a good chapter and I can't wait for another update so hoping it's soon.

I totally hate season 4! Oh you poor thing, having to re-watch . Hey, at least is not as bad as season 6, in where Leyton gets married! So reading some of the events of season 4, reminds me why Leyton suck, especially Peyton. True Love Always my as-! I like though that you still keep the Brucas. Oh and how instead of people suspecting Brooke is pregnant, Dan suspects is Haley. I like the ending, Im glad she was not completely freak out she was pregnant, she was happy.

This brings back memories. I remember watching this episode for the first time. In that moment, I never really thought that Mark end Brucas and never put them back together after that. UGH! Still mad about that!
Sorry, on the chapter: I like the details you added, and of course the switch from Brooke being preggers instead of Haley.)

Awww so sad for Brucas. Update soon)

I'm glad to see some back story for Good behavior. I have to say that the writing style threw me off a bit. It's harder to follow than the other story. Not that it's bad but it's different. I just want to shake both Brooke and Lucas. Great job so far!