LAST CHAPTER!

I liked when Jak asked if Parker was drunk xD

BWHAHAHAHA! YAY! Parker, sneaking off without Jak's permission.

I'm going to read the new story nows!
LOVE. A.O.D.808

OH MY GOSH! Dude I finally had time to finish reading your story! O.O

The beginning of this chapter almost made me freaking start crying, Oh the sadness! TT-T Though I gotta admit I was cracking up when Parker shot up and yelled at the man that was coughing LOL xD

It was great as usual and I LOVED it now to the final Chapter!
LOVE. A.O.D.808

I can't believe this story is over! But that was an awesome last chapter and a good way to go into the next story! I'm gonna go read the next one right now!
Well done on another great story! Bravo!

Yay, she's alright! Then again, the rest of it wouldn't be quite as awesome without Parker there.
I can't wait for the next chapter!

Aww, this chapter was great! I loved it!
I can't believe it's almost over already! I can't wait for the last chapter!

Why an OC? Why do tons of girls feel the need to glorify an OC in the J&D-verse?

You write really well, but stories focused on OCs are all cliche now-a-days. :C

Finally caught up YAY!

OMG! OMG! OMG! NOOOOOOOOOO! Parker has a red freaking slash! Gahhhhh I need to read more...I liked the chapter.
OMG! JAK WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO NOW?

Anyways, I loved it and can't wait for the last two chapters. :D

LOVE. A.O.D.808

Wonderland :D

Short but great chapter.

Yay! Jak got Parker! Finally together again...even though she's unconscious. I loved it!

LOVE. A.O.D.808

Another chapter read reviewed for, YAY!

Holy Sh*T! Erol you freaking b*tch, stabbing Parker, goodness such a crazy bastard.

Loved the chapter
Off to the next one :D

LOVE. A.O.D.808

Ooh a chapter taking place mainly in the past interesting!
I love learning stuff like this, it's always so interesting :D

OMG! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Not much to say for this one except I freaking loved it xD

LOVE. A.O.D.808

For a second I thought the chapter was 'T for Tiger' LOL :P

Wahhhhhhhhh! I hate it when Damas dies, I always get so sad even if it is in writing.
Veger is such an ass -.
I love it when they find out the precursors are ottsels, BAHAHAHAHAHA! Best part of the game LMFAO xD

Next chapter awaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy!
LOVE. A.O.D.808

Next one

Jak and Parker are so great together, feels good to say that again
I love how Jak is so determined to save Parker, YAY! :D"He hadn't realized until not how much he counted on Parker to cover his back until she was gone. He gritted his teeth, no she wasn't gone. He will get her back. BEST LINES OF THE CHAPTER :D

I loved those lines so much!
Now I'm off to the next chapter :D

LOVE. A.O.D.808

OMG! I have so much to review for, good thing I have time to review all these wonderful chapters now
I cannot believe I haven't had time to read this awesome story O.o

I want to know what's going to happen so I have go to the next chapter. YAY!

Erol is freaking crazy, and oh my gawd I'm so excited to learn more. :D

Not much to say about this chapter but I liked it!

LOVE. A.O.D.808

Wow, if I was any good at drawing this stuff, I would totally ask to draw this whole series, or at least my favorite chapters. But, alas, I suck at it. Maybe once I'm actually halfway decent at it?
I'm not believing that Parker is dead. It simply can't be. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh, yeah, and now I need to find you in dA. (That is, if you don't mind.)

Ooo, I'm sorry about what happened. At least you're okay now.

As for the chapter...noooooo! Parker! :O Can't wait for the next chapter!)