weird, rapey, unromantic. call child protective services

That was interesting. I would have loved to have seen more

You suck! Ha ha.

ohhhh Jareth's a dead man! *snickers* If I was Sarah I have beat him to death with my mothers favorite cast iron skillets!

Beautiful work. Love it.

lol! cute. .

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ OH PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ write more I must know what happens next and Sarah's reaction in the chapter :( XD

That can't be the end. How does Sarah react to waking up in the Underground?

wow..this is very different:o)..i look forward to reading more:oD

Oh I bet Sarah was PISSED when she woke up in the Castle Beyond The Goblin City! Heaven and hell hath no fury like a woman after all.

Echoing what everyone else is screaming for, PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THIS. I mean, I can understand if you've lost interest in a story, but you can't just leave us all hanging like that! It's too intriguing to stop right there. It's got infinite potential, and so many questions to still answer. How excited exactly is Elina once she arrives at the Labyrinth? How is Jareth going to explain this all away to Sarah? How is Sarah going to take this all once she wakes up? (Very angrily, we know, but VOICE THAT.) And what kind of "dangers" would Elina have faced Aboveground? And most importantly, would those dangers follow her Underground?

Questions, questions.

I am going crazy wondering what you had in mind as to what will happen next. And why you up and put this amazing fanfiction on hiatus. If you need inspiration, wipe off that old VCR or go to YouTube to watch the movie again. Or look at the crapload of fanart online. Or even read other fanfics here or elsewhere. Seriously! And if you need a beta reader, I will be happy to offer my services. (My best friend sends me her stories often, and they're awesome now if I do say so myself)

So... please. I am part of the crowd that is begging you to keep going with this story. If you're still reading, thanks for doing so and PLEASE KEEP GOING!

This can't be the end! You HAVE to continue, pleeeeease! The idea of Jareth having a child is so new, you can do a lot with it. And Elina is the first of her kind- human and whatever-Jareth-is.

wait just a minute! how is this a completed story?

"Opens mouth to cheer but then slowly closes" Wait...that's /IT/? No! Sara...Jareth..ELINA! It can't just end! As Nyad Queen I command you to make a sequel!...Please?

N.C

*cocks eyebrow* THAT"S IT?

what about Sarah's reaction! that CAN"T just be it...PLEASE CONTINUE IT!