   Voracious 12/21/04 . chapter 1This is well written. You post something like this to tease us and then discontinue it? Shame on you! I hope to see more on this one day. I certainly enjoyed it. |
| BloodyGlass11 3/5/03 . chapter 1 I thought it was great Dennis is my favorite person I love that movie! ! I only have 1 13 ghosts story I plain to make more Bye Bye Good Ficcy!
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| Kazune 12/21/02 . chapter 1 Interesting story you have here! And it's so well-written...very nice! Keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| s12 12/5/02 . chapter 1 Best. Story. Ever. |
| DreamADream 12/3/02 . chapter 1 Very awesome! You sound like a professional writer already! I like the background you gave Dennis! Pretty imaginitive! I hope you get the second chapter up soon! I'd love to read!-Missy
AKA
Dream A Dream |
| long under tree 11/29/02 . chapter 1 cool! man. this is good. keep it up!
my only grouse is that I would prefer it if Dennis continued being the one talking, but hey, if you'd rather do it the 3rd person view, it's fine by me.
hope chapter 2 comes soon!) |
| johnnydepplover 11/1/02 . chapter 1 You MUST continue this! This is pretty much the best story in this section. And in my mind, Dennis Rafkin is the only character that is actually good in Thir13teen Ghosts. And I really like Matthew Lillard (Dennis Rafkin) alot. I really do. He completely steals the movie from everyone else acting in it because he's so good. And this story is the best. You've captured Dennis's character perfectly. I love this story, and it is going on my Favorite Stories list. |
| ghost-wiring 9/15/02 . chapter 1 Excellent story! I really like the idea of telling the story of Dennis's life before he met Cyrus! Keep up the excellent work! |
| Undead spirit 9/9/02 . chapter 1 So cool,please write more,and give it an actoul ,it was good,though.) |
| Pyro Under Insanity 9/8/02 . chapter 1 absolutly looooooove the story! dennis is sooo cute! i am extremly pissed off that he died... stupid idiotic dad of the stupid idiotic son and stupid idiotic daughter *mumbles profanity*...
heh heh heh... weeeeeeeeeeeee... |
| Pyro Under Insanity 9/8/02 . chapter 1 absolutly looooooove the story! dennis is sooo cute! i am extremly pissed off that he died... stupid idiotic dad of the stupid idiotic son and stupid idiotic daughter *mumbles profanity*...
heh heh heh... weeeeeeeeeeeee... |
| Allison 9/8/02 . chapter 1 It's really good so far. I can't wait for you to add more! |
| Bubblecup 8/29/02 . chapter 1 OOOOOOOOOOHHHHH! So cool i loved it u just have to write more i really like the whole DBZ thing! |
| Shasty McNasty 8/27/02 . chapter 1 Tiara! Hey, I'm just now reviewing this. I have to say that I like the additions made, and I didn't know you knew a good goddamn thing about DBZ. *impressed* Anyway, write more soon. I'll talk to you later. |
| Gwendolyn the Kananite 8/18/02 . chapter 1 Ahh. Since I saw this movie I've been thinking of writing a fanfic about it but never thought of how. I love this!
But when I was watching it the first time, and I don't remember any of the characters names because I only saw it like twice, I remember feeling the happiness when they first pan around the house and you can hear the family outside, and then throughout I could feel that deep, engraved sadness that their father felt...and that part where he's stuck behind the glass and his wife comes...I was like "Fanfiction in a bottle!
I didn't think of writing one with Rafkin though! I like it! :PPP |
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