 whoknoez 4/1/04 . chapter 11Great story, but I see that you haven't updated since like... two years ago. -_-... *Sigh* Update soon! It would be a shame to not finish this story! |
 petite 3/10/04 . chapter 11 (;_;)... hellouw,ma'am? isn't it a little too long pause for this story? you're not forgetting this one, do you?
hik. please. please reduce the number of good authors who like to decapitate their reader's happiness outside... |
 Dark Phoenix 3/2/04 . chapter 11 Great fic... so far. It's been almost 2 years, so... please pick it up again? |
 damselindistress2 1/30/04 . chapter 11 this story is too good to be left undone. i hope to see the next chapter up soon! |
 Carter Tachikawa 1/7/04 . chapter 11Whew, finally, I got through all the chapters. I can't believe you left it here T.T. Well, I hope you pick this up soon. All this that's going on has to be resolved. Keep it up, it's a great story.
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 Carter Tachikawa 1/7/04 . chapter 10Poor Misao is now stuck in jail. I feel bad for her. But man, what a car chase! Anyway, on to your latest chapter I go. Keep it up.
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 Carter Tachikawa-not logged in 1/5/04 . chapter 9 Yumi's dead? Well, that's something I didn't expect. Shishio killing the woman that loves him. Anyway, another great chapter. keep it up.
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 Misao Mei Mei 1/4/04 . chapter 11now, I know you have updated for almost a year and a half, but I was just rereading it and even though I also know that you're on hiatus, I wish you would update sometime, so maybe I can hope for that some more Aoshi/Misao interaction? |
 Carter Tachikawa-still not logged in 1/4/04 . chapter 8 Oh, he kissed her! He kissed her! Finally, they'll get up nice and close. He he he. Overall, I liked this chapter. Some interesting stuff going on. Keep it up.
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 Carter Tachikawa 1/2/04 . chapter 7Whew! For a moment, I thought Soujirou would do something to Misao. Anyway, I like how he's becoming more caring to her. This story gets more and more intriguing. Keep it up and keep writing.
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 Carter Tachikawa 1/2/04 . chapter 6Yeah, I could tell both parts were anger driven. Oh, so that's what Shishio needs Aoshi for! Anyway, great story still. Keep writing.
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 Carter Tachikawa 1/1/04 . chapter 5Oh, what will happen next? Very interesting. Sorry I can't give a more better review but I have to leave now. Good story, keep it up.
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 Carter Tachikawa-not logged in 12/31/03 . chapter 4 Oh, poor Misao! I hope she gets well soon. And Yumi? What is she doing here? Anyway, I've gotta leave now but I'll be sure to finish this story soon. Nice job. Keep writing.
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 Carter Tachikawa-still not logged in 12/31/03 . chapter 3 *falls to the ground* Okina's not her grandfather? How'd that happen? Oh, what'll happen next? And the whole with Aoshi and Hannya, what will happen with them? So many questions I want answered. Well, I'll probably get them when I read on, right? Anyway, still a great story. Keep writing.
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 Carter Tachikawa-not logged in 12/31/03 . chapter 2 EEp, sorry for taking long on this review. FFN wouldn't let review last time. Anyway, nice chapter. Oh, Misao got caught. I like their interaction and whatnot. I'm still reading and on I go to the next chapter. Keep it up.
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