This story was amazing, i could barely read the end because i was giggling so much. PLEASE make another chapter. PLEASE.

I loved this. Its so in character.

Eeeee!

Darn it, this story is so cute! You caught their friendship/rivalry/romance so well, I could imagine it as a part of the game. Kudos to you, and keep up the good work!

Pretty good. I think that you captured their emotions and pretense of disagreement well.

I loved this fic,it was cute,( I been looking for stories with Mao Raspberyl showing their love to one another,I love those type of stories) ,I really wanted it to continue,it was to sweet to end like this,but for a one shot it was a really cute ending,if it had to be a one shot Im glad it was a lengthy one,excellent story,consider continuing it one day,it should keep going IMO (love can make anyone get OOC,I love it when it shows in stories like this _)

Nice story. Mao and Beryl were in character and I think this story is actually cute and I don't say that often

I knew this would happen someday,

Great story

OMGOMGOMG! *squeals* so cuuuuuuuute! I luv it! Hurray for storms! It brought Mao and Beryl together...well, something like that. I luv it too much, it's so romantic -ish and cuuute! X3