|Reviews for Seven Deadly Sins: Invidia|
| ProfessorofFiction 2/1/13 . chapter 5
This is soooooo sexy...my mind is clouding reading this...soooooo hot! I'm a sinner...yes I admit it...I AM A SINNER for loving this to pieces! 8D
You are amazing! Favourite story, author, follow story, author!
| guest 12/28/12 . chapter 5
this story is really good wish it was longer tho
| XionTheBlackRose 11/11/12 . chapter 1
Oh I like this..
| Maradyne 11/3/12 . chapter 5
*spams reviews* omg this was so hOT and SExy...seriously xDDDDD omg...my mouth stayed open until i finished the chapter hahaha. I dunno why people doesnt like enough this chapter and pair, i love sora and ven xD it's my unusual otp and ven acting like a slut i just oMG...I CAN IMAGINE HIM THIS WAY WITH VANI AND I EXPLODE! So damn hot xDDDDD *blood everywhere* my nose...anyway talking seriously about the chapter poor ven and sora sees ven as his beloved roxas, it must be painful to desire something you can get through another person, i felt sad for them and i wanna see vani with ven ;_; i was wondering...are you going to change the sora pov to another one or it will this way the whole story? I dunno, since the other pair it's vanven(if i didnt read wrong xDDD/slapped) then i'm curious o3o but i still love so much sora's one :333.
Hope you update this soon ;w; or i'll use all my magic powers to promote your fanfics and get more reviews because you deserve them! *kicks people with her mind*
Yesterday i played as sora with a roxas and i couldnt help but remember you xD. Shit, it was so cute, i almost eat roxas with kisses lolol
| HikariKH 10/23/12 . chapter 5
*glass-shaterring squeal because it updated*
| Karkaliciously Homestucked 10/22/12 . chapter 5
...no, you actually aren't the only one who can see that...it kinda makes sense...
| Eternal L wyrm 10/22/12 . chapter 5
You know, I don't think you should change the pairing. The whole thing is just setting up the SoRoku pairing, so it's alright.
Although I have to ask, was Roxas eaten by the toilet or something? Because we haven't seen or heard from him since chapter 2 (not even a passing mention of "oh by the way, he was there at the table with us"). it's just a little weird. Other than that, yeah, I've got no complaints. Keep up the good work :)
| RNSVCZ 10/22/12 . chapter 5
UPDATE? YEAH! SorVen FTW! Thanks for continuing this story, I hope to see more of this! (Slutty Ven made me giggle, I never saw him portrayed like that! XD)
| InnocentGraces 10/22/12 . chapter 5
Didn't expect you to update this at all!
But it's still good.
(I'd admit, I didn't exactly enjoy this particular chapter, as I don't really ship those two together. But I know this is to build up the story, so I won't blame you. Plus, just because we had similar interests doesn't mean it's precisely the same. Nor does that mean we share the same opinions. So yeah.)
| fantorathelia 10/22/12 . chapter 5
OOH SUPER KINKY I LOVE YOU AUTHOR
I think I've read this before but I didn't continue. I regret that.
You know, you've now opened up the SoVen fanatic in me. THANK YOU
| breaking6883 10/20/12 . chapter 4
Plz update soon:)
| Guest 10/4/12 . chapter 4
Really Sora?! REALLY!? Id excpect SO much more from you!Honestly!
| CaraxSora 10/3/12 . chapter 4
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG PLEASE CONTINUE I cannot wait for the soraxven chapter ** please continue!
| RNSVCZ 7/27/12 . chapter 4
Fangirl side: woah...
Calm side: yeah, woah...
Me: Wow, that chapter was interesting. Its a very good chapter, very well-writen and I don't see any mistakes! Good work! Can't wait for the update!
Fangirl side: I like the last sentence. :)
Calm and Me: *stares at weirdly*
Calm: Just, wow...
Me: You would say that...
Fangirl: Sooooooo? o/w/o I'm being honest!
Calm and Me: *walks away*
Fangirl: *follows* WHAT DID I DO?
| xnxs13 4/21/12 . chapter 4
Aww, geez! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT'LL HAPPEN NEXT xD