|Reviews for Tiger Lily|
| Gidgi 6/11/12 . chapter 8
Nice story kind of like the way it take. Meh! That's bad you've stopped to write here ):
but I wanted to help, as I'm French, for the little translation
"Uho 'Tu es magnifique' dit-il... 'Je t'aime' dit-il... Alors pourquoi dois-je débarrasser les tables? Est-ce que je suis une serveuse? Ne suis-je pas l'hôtesse?"
Hope I've helped (and hope to see the next chapter soon )
| XxrockyxX 4/6/12 . chapter 8
I really love this story! The setting is just perfect, and what you've done to incorporate the original idea of Inception is really clever. Arthur and Eames are just amazing. Looking forward to reading more of this story :)
| Bethany Ruth 10/11/11 . chapter 8
I'm excited now: what's gonna happen? I just don't know! :D
| OneWhoSitsWithTheTurtles 9/6/11 . chapter 6
So three huge glasses of water seemed to settle my stomach! yay! I'm really glad; I hate throwing up :( Anyway, since I was feeling a little better and looking for something to read before bed, I decided to read another chapter of TL :) First things first, I am thoroughly impressed that Eames parallel parked while drunk XD That is just impressive haha. Anyway, I love drunk Arthur . Always fun to write. Though I'm not very happy to hear that this job is going to be impossible *is nervous*
| OneWhoSitsWithTheTurtles 9/6/11 . chapter 5
Good chapter and good story continuing on. I'm really curious to see all the stuff that's no doubt going to happen with Saito's business proposal haha. And I'm looking forward to Arthur and Eames getting closer, now that Arthur is back safe. I think my only comment for improvement is that the characters sometimes seem a little out of character. I actually hate leaving this comment because, as a fanfiction writer myself, I know how annoying it is sometimes trying to keep them in character. I just feel that everyone was a little rushed in how they handled the situation. I'd just recommend some of them be a little more subtle? I just don't think Dom would flash a gun at a receptionist as his first option. Anyways I'm rambling. Really good chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more :D
| Sir Stud Muffin 8/16/11 . chapter 8
Please update soon!
| KiaCoral 7/13/11 . chapter 8
aaaaaah, i love the 20's! XD XD XD XD XD XD and this is just 'smashing'! XD i looooooooove this, if you couldn't figure that out, and your writing is nicely done, the characters are portrayed well, and i can't bloody wait for the next update. :)
keep up the good work!
| AthenaAlpha 7/10/11 . chapter 8
Aww, I feel so sorry for Robert in this. He sounds like a kicked puppy :(
So Saito kicks puppies and gets Arthur beaten up...and he has the audacity to still be awesome. So many mixed emotions! Saito, why are you doing this to me!
(Can't wait for more. You deserve more love for this! It's a wonderful fic)
| AthenaAlpha 7/10/11 . chapter 7
I'm really curious to see how you work a real-world inception attempt. (P.S. Even though he got Arthur tortured, I kind of this your Saito is awesome...I'm trying to work out the conflicting emotions regarding his character. Lol.)
Dom's reaction to Ariadne was cute. He never bothered to check out who the reporter was that got in in the first place? He deserves to continue to get scooped! Lol.
| AthenaAlpha 7/10/11 . chapter 6
Drunk Arthur ;) I am totally willing to accept that it was solely to advance the plot. And, you know, if it comes with the mental image of Arthur all rumpled and clinging...so be it.
I love the Arthur/Eames chemistry. They haven't even done anything yet, but I totally feel the emotions. Very nice build up.
| AthenaAlpha 7/10/11 . chapter 5
Kidnapped!Arthur is, in general, an excellent idea because you get to see Dom and Eames freak out over his safety. Which pretty much makes my insides melt.
I can't believe Saito got Arthur beaten! I regularly love Saito, but I love Arthur more.
Love the twist though. No one says no to Saito!
| AthenaAlpha 7/10/11 . chapter 4
Ah...Yusuf. The secret hero of my heart. :)
(And also...no worries, Eames, I appreciate you! :D )
I really enjoy your story-telling abilities and how you introduce the characters. Yusuf as a showy bartender reminds me of the scene in the movie after the van flips where he's all like "did you guys see that!" But everyone is unconcious. XD
He'd totally be a showoff as a bartender.
| AthenaAlpha 7/10/11 . chapter 3
I absolutely LOVE that you had Arthur rescue Eames. 3
I have a secret weakness for Arthur being Dom's trusted right-hand man. I love fics that play up their partnership/friendship, so Arthur being the one to talk Dom down from his anger on Eames' behalf made me smile.
Arthur: The solver of all the world's problems.
| AthenaAlpha 7/10/11 . chapter 2
Oh, Eames, Eames. Sucker for a plucky, spunky reporter? Should have known. :D
Ariadne as a reporter is a fun idea. It brings her in as the outsider, like in the movie, but I'm curious to see if you work her into the group as thoroughly as in the movie. Often Ariadne ends up a second fiddle character in fics where Mal is alive (I'm guilty of this, definately. In the fic I wrote she made only sporadic and relatively forgettable appearances).
Your Ariadne is cute :)
| AthenaAlpha 7/10/11 . chapter 1
Bear with me- I've been reading this story from the very beginning, but I haven't taken the time to review (Shame on me!) But I'm offended, on your behalf, that this story doesn't have more reviews, so I'm going to go through each chapter and write the review I SHOULD have written when I read it.
So here goes:
Chapter 1- really interesting concept. Time period pieces are always trickier, because you have to work within a set frame and be realistic or it can get silly. But this is perfect. Especially since if Arthur lived during this particular time period he would be one GQMF. No joke, sexiest man alive.
Very original, I'm really excited for this :)