Please forgive me for being self-centered in this review, but I cannot help but cross-checking my own SI while reading this. Some parts positively were embarrassing. Check this"I went to Japan in coach-class. It was a very uncomfortable and lengthy trip.
versus"I do not mind the long and tiresome flight, sitting anonymously in the belly of a gigantic airliner.
Or what about the language confusion. Zannen desne. And the crumpled or missing ending. At least Eli made me to remove footnotes. What a disaster!

Obviously now I have to surrender my baton of the self-appointed FFIRC's White Knight of SI. Great work.

Those interested in merciless lampooning of ficdom may also be interested in "Aragorn's Average Adventure" in the LOTR section.

Section one: my review.

Hahahahahahahahaha.

Ha.

that was hilarious.)

Aaaaaah, that's so hilarious! XDD Hee hee, Super Jeremy. . . *snort* Quite funny yet depressingly true. Damn those SI's. Damn them to hell. Except this one, because it's funny and pokes fun at other damnable stories I'll shut up now. Great writings! _ -Chibikat