I can;t believe i still find crap like this on ff net. have a problem? come bitch at me on my account!

good chapter!luv it!just saying these chapters are SOOOOOOO long that it took me a total of 2 and a half hours just to read two of them!

do you just happen to watch outlaw star?there was some stuff in here that greatly resembled that show.

you did NOT just go and copy powerpuff girls!

After the climactic battle with the darkness, as well as Tenchi marrying both Ayeka and Ryoko, AND having all those Tenchi realities crossover was mind boggling. Now with all the action in this Episode, you won;t be able to stop reading. Mike has done a fine job in storytelling thus far!

dennisud