Loved it, i think you really managed to catch a original dynamic)

i wish that the t.v. series had been like this

This is really really adorable and I was strolling (in a manner of speaking) through recs before I went to sleep, even though it's 240am, and I read it, even though my habit is to mark them and read them in the morning as bait to wake up (because mornings are evil things that shouldn't exist, of course) but this one looked too wonderful for me to wait for, and, gosh! It's adorable! I hope you'll update soon, and thanks for posting in the first place! (and, sorry for the lack of coherency. Like I said, it's 240am. No one should have to think AND write understandable sentences then, haha).

Aw, another adorable chapter! Well done.

Nope. Nothing like riding a camel at all. XDD

I admit I don't know that much about Doctor Who, Chaka, but I figured you'd be a good person to learn from. Heck, you already knew that. XD

I liked how you threw flashes of color into the story, much more than I do with mine-yellow eyes, purple grass, black bones, deep purple clouds. I could stand to do that some more. I also liked the Disney reference-"Ariel Pond". Nice.

I think you mentioned this before someplace, but Eleven seems to be a big kid, and it really does come across here, very well-a big kid with the universe as his playground. Or maybe, a wise old man with the wisdom to be playful like a child. It'd be interesting to see how he'd get along with Iroh, if you ask me. That'd be one conversation to eavesdrop on.

I liked this story. I promise I'll get to the rest.

oh thankyou soooo much for updating i love it, bless amelia i was scared riding a bike so i couldnt imagine what flying on one of those creatures would be like lol

why isnt this updated it is awesome!

hi just wanted to ask if u were ever going to update this

AWWWWW. SO ADORABLE! Fantastic job.

It was great! I love how you are adding bits of season five to this.

Just read the whole thing! Great!

LM x

This is very cute!

Oh, that was brilliant! River and Amelia's interactions were just wonderful and I'd love to see more, pretty please!

Awesome chapter! River's interaction with Amelia is amazing! Splendid job.

Aww, what an adorable and hilarious chapter. Poor Craig. Nice work!