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Reviews for: Rumpelstiltskin's Apprentice
catakit 4/17/06 . chapter 1
Oi! You! How dare you abandon this poor story! Grumph, I even tracked it down just to check if you'd changed your mind. *hands on hips* There is more to life than Harry Potter.
zagato 11/9/03 . chapter 1
Good story and even greater twist! I like this. Right now, I am just guessing Edmonton's wench. Hmm, a dragon and she's exhausted. I would say she's Snow White or Sleeping Beauty. I think one gets tired easily if one has been used to sleeping for one hundred years. Please update.
UnrepentantReader 2/26/03 . chapter 1
Yeah, the Grimm ending was bad. I'd be interested in seeing more of your stories set in the Inn:
Alory Shannon 8/31/02 . chapter 1
Yeah, I agree with you completely-'Rumplestiltskin' did NOT have a satisfactory ending! I like yours a lot better, btw. You could probably publish a story like this; fairy tales aren't really copyrighted by anyone, are they? Well, I hope you write more soon! I like it a lot! Serenity *
Giesbrecht 6/13/02 . chapter 1
Lemme guess: Snow White? lol I was thrilled to read that you're a Christian so'm I! Sometimes it gets a little lonely out here, doesn't it? I'm currently at Bible college, but I'm actually not the only HP fan there.
You've got great dialogue and some fun stories. Do keep writing!
Kirjava 4/6/02 . chapter 1
This looks pretty cute! However, as of yet, there doesn't really seem to be a plot. Are you going to be bringing in more fairy tales? Just curious. Anyway, I wont"guess" who the fair wench would be, yes I'm sure you like that term- maybe a little overdone.
ami 4/6/02 . chapter 1
really good. i never did like how the original ended...

hmmm, lets see, who could edmonton's fair wench be... gee, snow white maybe...

anywho, love the story so far, next chapter soon please
Name Changer 4/5/02 . chapter 1
Hello-hi! Very good start I'd say ol' chap! It was very descriptive and imaginative. Keep up the good work!$p!r!t $av!0ur
Bil 4/5/02 . chapter 1
Ooh, this is definitely promising. Rumpelstiltskin has never been even close to being a favourite of mine, but this is great already.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but wasn't the girl stuck spinning gold because her mother was ashamed that she was so lazy? I may have the wrong story, but if I'm right, is she going to be lazy in this story? Guess I'll just have to wait and see .*Any*way, I'll finish rambling. I really like this story so far, and I can't wait to read the rest.
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