Maria is Philippines?

Maria is the Philipines right?

This was very, very cute to read! I loved the relationship between 'Tonio and Lovi so cute

But anyway, you should really change "calmar" to "calmate" because the former means 'to calm' and the latter means 'calm down'. OH, and "silencio, los niños" should be "Silencio, niños." because the former says "the kids", which doesn't make much sense here and "the latter does.

Apologies if I came off rude in correcting your Spanish; I just needed to point it out.

This is sooooooo good! I'm not sure if you want people to fix some of the language for you , but I just thought I'd say:

'Calmar' actually means to calm. You wanted 'calmate' which does mean 'calm down'.

I'm sorry I can't really help with the Italian and the rest of the spanish was fine! You did a really good job with this! :D

Love,

Huffah!

cool:)

I love, love, LOVE this story!XD So cute.

I can recognize filipino slang anywhere. (Is it Tagalog? My mom is teaching me that and Visayan dialect also so i still cant tell the difference.) MariaPhilippines yes?w I rp that OC as well.

I love, love, LOVE this story!XD So cute.

I can recognize filipino slang anywhere. (Is it tagal MariaPhilippines yes?w I rp that OC as well.

Poor little Lovi..

But the ending is so CUUUUUTEEE!

I wish I have a cap like that too Hehe!

VERY GOOD Story! Keep writing yupz? :D