 everlovin 6/16/11 . chapter 14LMXB! Loved the story! Thank you for sharing! |
 Lalena87 6/11/11 . chapter 14that was a nice ending! but the story was way to short! But I realy enjoyed reading it! Thanks! |
 Shadows-of-Realm 6/11/11 . chapter 14Very nice... so this is what a voyage on a trading ship brings! |
 Traveler's Chick 6/11/11 . chapter 14Such a good ending! I was really hoping that you would put something in there about one of them not being able to sleep without the other there. And you did! I'd love to read a follow up if you ever get the chance to read it.
Again, GREAT story! I really liked it!) |
 Veera Grier 6/11/11 . chapter 14I really love this story! And this final chapter is just great, they are so cute together... Thank you) |
 bailey1ak 6/11/11 . chapter 14Loved the ending and the uncertainty in their words as they tried not to put too much out there, while still hoping. |
 ladygris 6/11/11 . chapter 14Woohoo! Yay! They finally talked. . .well, if you count what they did as talking. More like letting their actions speak for them. :D
Either way, wonderful story! Thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish.
Looking forward to the possible follow-up when you're ready and able to write it.) |
 hifield 6/11/11 . chapter 14Ahhhhhhh they're such a special couple. Love those awkward moments great story and well written.
Eagerly waiting for the follow-up. |
 daisyscrapper 6/11/11 . chapter 13The point system remark was hilarious! |
 daisyscrapper 6/11/11 . chapter 14It was great how they both met up on the balcony. The scene was perfectly awkward. I'd love to see you continue this! Great story! |
 ladygris 6/10/11 . chapter 13"Doc knows about the point system." ROFL! Yeah, they're in hot water for that one!
But what an announcement. Ronon telling Sam that they're married was just as hilarious.
I'm really looking forward to the final chapter. Great work. |
 GJ 6/10/11 . chapter 13 Great chapter, please don't end it tomorrow I love this story and there is so much more that you could do with it. Pleeeeeeease keep it going for a bit longer) |
 Shadows-of-Realm 6/10/11 . chapter 13Ha Ha... maybe the relationship continues? |
 Lalena87 6/10/11 . chapter 13That was surprisingly easy! What is ging to happen next?
I loved the funny moments in the past two chapters
I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
 Veera Grier 6/10/11 . chapter 13Well, obviously I am to suspicious and I see the evil everywhere
Love the fact that nobody believes the story of good luck charm of Jennifer. And the output of Ronon who announced they are married! So funny! |