If you're up to it, please update. I like the story so far. It's a good twist and a very likely possibility in the Beast Wars. In human history the victors do write the story, and the descendents of the loosing faction often suffer for their ancestors' deeds.
Also, I enjoy reading twists every now and again. Where the good guys are bad and bad guys are good, a total change of perspective.

hello, i am writing for update for ages...it was a brilliant story and i am really really expecting more.

MUST SEE MORE!

HIS!*ahem
you are a very good writer

i would love to see more from you

Wow, you have created an excilent story. It is very compeling. It's more like that is is what was going on on cybertron before the beast wars ever happen. I await your next chapter).

Did you get the idea for this story from Communist russia or from nazi gremany. Wouldn't it be interesting if there were camps were they sent Preds.

Really Excited to see what happens.]

Took ages to read, but i liked this fic. Really did! Megatron is becoming one of my fave chars, after ... all the G1 guys.. except for Wheelie, he's too 'cute' to be good (that guy is evil. No one convinces me of the opposite).

. Oh well, hope you write more!

Cyberfrost

Even though you may be too shy, I am not that much: once more, a great chapter, despite the delay. BTW, Cybertron Chronicles has come to an end. It would please me immensely if you read the last chapter.

Albedo

I've never left a review on a fic before, but I just had to say that I'm enjoying this one. I've lately become interested in the Pred/Maximal politics of Cybertron, and it's difficult to find any fics about it, so I'm glad I've found yours. I've always figured that the Preds were treated as second-class citizens by the ruling Maximals. You've got a lot of good ideas, and I really hope you continue this fic soon!
As for characterization, I'm loving young Megatron...even back then he was a smooth operator who could talk people into following him anywhere _. His character is completely believable.

P.S. You probably don't know _this_ name, but we've met on GAFF (hint: name starts with T _)...and I was wondering if you could have a look at my fics if you have time. I'd love to know what you think...

Neat little POV. I'm guessing the first-year is Scorponok.

Spiffy. _

Suntrail is obviously Silverbolt. BRILLIANT classroom scene! _ You should some more time on the 'Cons classes.

I THINK Surge is Waspinator, but I'm not sure. Darkmist is blatantly Tarantulus! _ VERY cool moments in the ruins- a great display of Megatron's character.

Interesting look at BW-Cybertron. Soooo, the Maxies are an oppressive regime, eh? 'splains a lot.

It's getting really good! Please write more, I need to know what is going to happen!)

Gorgeous, my friend, yesssss... My best congrats for you, hungrily waiting for new chapters!

must have more!