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| kewl-dude42 2005-03-30 ch 5,  | abuseyou had a great start but a horrible way to end it |
| keira 2005-01-30 ch 5, anon. | abusehuh... kinda short, but good: short but sweet. good job. :-) |
| keira 2005-01-30 ch 4, anon. | abusedouble uh-oh... :) |
| keira 2005-01-30 ch 3, anon. | abuseuh-oh... :-) |
| keira 2005-01-30 ch 2, anon. | abusehaha :-) |
| keira 2005-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abusehehe like it...kinda dry humor some of the time, but most of it's really funny!! good job!! |
| blaire 2004-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou know what's annoying? when you ask readers to review 'following' your guidelines. just be thankful they read the story in the first place and reviewed. |
| Colbers 2003-10-08 ch 1, | abuseIf you can't handle critical reviews, why even post your story on FF.net? Not everyone wants to stroke your ego all the time, you know. |
| Abby 2003-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LOVE Tommy WAY better with long hair than short hair. Short hair is too plain now adays so I'm kind of turn-on with something different. |
| MysticSorceror 2003-03-06 ch 7, | abuseI like your fanfic, perhaps make you ideas more complex, use different words, I dont know it just seemed a little bland when I was reading it, have something bigger happen in all the chapters, so that people cant shut the screen off. Anyway good job! |
| therock3407 2002-12-07 ch 6, | abuseNice story! I like it. I hope people make more 3rd rock storys! |
| KittenOfDoom 2002-10-27 ch 7, | abuseTypos...many typos. Some rewording could have been done to make it a bit better. The ending wasn't too bad. I really like how closely you came to having Harry act exactly like he does on the show. By the way, I like Tommy with longer hair, because he's cuter that way, and because a lot funnier things happened when he had long hair. :) |
| tricia 2002-07-26 ch 6, anon. | abuseThe ending was pretty bad, but I enjoyed the rest of it |
| Phoebe Hermione Solomon 2002-06-13 ch 6, | abusereal good |
| Shane 2002-06-04 ch 6, anon. | abusefirst off, mary already knew about them being aliens, stupid, second of all, that sucked |