One hell of a story- way to go Joan!keep up the good work.

Wow. That was impressive. And the Corinthian in a human body... *shudder* Insightful. (Especially like the line, "Do they need a dark mirror?" It's depressingly true, when you think about it. Though... well, to quote the last essayist in that book of Sandman short stories,[Death] has a brother who believes in hope.")

I love this story. You're right, humanity doesn't *need* a dark mirror. Kudos to the Corinthian (and you!) for figuring out the answer to that riddle.

Too gorgeous. I honestly cannot tell you my esteem for your style and prose. You have captured the tone, and the essence of the material so well. Moreover, you have imbued with a uniqueness neither contrived nor overused. Bravo. He deserved a story, it deserved mention. It needed to be said, the highest praise I can give.

Words escape me (mostly anyway). That was really good. I always liked the Corinthian and you do him really well. I like a lot of your other stuff too. Keep it up!

Not bad, not bad at all... I'll have to read more of your stuff -

Yay! Wow. great story. Nicely done! more stories please!)