 zenbon zakura 5/24/12 . chapter 15vlad you sexy and cunning beast. too bad integra will reign you in like a dog. not that vlad would care. lol
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 Soul93 5/24/12 . chapter 15 This one was even shorter, lol. Loved this chapter! Reading it was pure bliss! |
 Saria Lynn 5/23/12 . chapter 15W. Lynn here,
I absolutely loved this chapter! I just couldn't keep still while reading. So serious, I was probably grinning from ear to ear the entire time. It's starting to get really good now, though. Hopefully Vlad will find a way around Walter, and I'm wishing the best for both Pip and Seras as well.
Please, I need a Chapter 16, or else I will die of suspense. |
 Shinkicker 5/21/12 . chapter 14An interesting story. I do like the history you have mixed in with the character interactions. Women really did get a raw deal back in the day.
Random thought, final chapter with a scene from the Bram Stoker movie where he abandons God and becomes a vampire, because of his wife's suicide at news of his death. And a flash forward to Alucard remembering all of this, and considering how no matter the age he is always with the same people hehe.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it. |
 Mary Queen of Scots 5/7/12 . chapter 14 I know Vlad the impaler had a first wife who we don't know much about not even her name and they had a son called Mihena the Bad a name well deserved as he murdered his half brothers by his father's second marriage to Ilona an hungarian noblewoman. What im wondering is Seras going to be playing the unknown first wife and Integra will be playing the part of Ilona? Not that i support Alucard and Seras i see their reletionship in the terms of family but it would make sense for the regent to bind Vlad's loyalties closer to him by giving him is yonger daughter and then giving his elder daughter to a much more important ally. If thats so not only is Seras in love with another man her life ends tragically if you know the history of Vlads first marriage. I love your story its so rare to have a good history fic! |
 Penny 5/6/12 . chapter 1 AHHHHH Wait, whaaaaat? Amazing duel btwn Vlad and Integra? Yes, please. Tell me she is going to win.
Looking forward to the tournament thing. Looks like that'll be fun.
EEEKKKKKKK! More chemistry. More AxI, they need to fall for each other. Now. :PP
The back and forth tension just proves it even more.
Can't wait for more! |
 Soul93 5/6/12 . chapter 14That chapter was far too short! As always the chapter was worth the wait though and a wonderful read! Anticipating the next update! I'm also anxious for Victor to come into the story only because I'm hoping it will push Vlad and Integra closer together! Er what's up with Integra's mother? Anyways great chapter! |
 KL 5/6/12 . chapter 14 Wanna More! |
 hellsingfan101 5/6/12 . chapter 14Oh ho! A problem in the engagement? Well I hope so hehe :p Interesting idea, and this new news will definately make Pip want to train alot more. I wonder who will win this duel? I think Integra might do something to surprise our Wallachian |
 Democritus of Abdera 4/23/12 . chapter 1Very interesting premise. And original, it is not often that one finds a unique piece like this in fanfiction. Historical fiction is normally not something that interests me very much at all, but you have kept the attitudes and dispositions of the characters just modern enough to make the setting anachronistic but relatable. That is a hard balance to strike. I have not finished reading this piece as yet, but I have noticed a definite increase in confidence and quality as the chapters progress, and how startlingly fast that is occuring. Speaking personally, it took a great deal of time to improve my own writing, but you seem to do so with great and consistent speed.
Are your early chapters a little bit messy? Yes, but obviously none of us have access to a full time editor, and god knows I never wanted to go back and revise my earlier work. Besides, in the little writing I have done I have found that the only way to be creative is to get a little bit messy. And in your case, it is a very good mess. Couldn't have made a better mess myself. Please make more. |
 Beeftink 4/19/12 . chapter 1I am completely enthralled by this tale you have spun, weaving history and legend around my favorite Hellsing characters. I must confess, the more I read, the more I am drawn in, and more often than not, lately I find myself reading this whilst imagining it as a series, the likes of which you'd find along side Game of Thrones, etc. Yes, it could certainly hold its own, what with the intrigue and depth of your characters. And as a major AxI fan, I'm seriously hooked even more! Thank you for not surrendering Seras to her standard, sheepish fate I also believe she can and will learn much from Integra. Now on to more Integra and Vlad awesomeness! |
 Silent Inferno 4/10/12 . chapter 13Thank you so so so much for shout out! Once again, your writing is impeccable, enthralling, and captivating. This story is actually my favorite that I have ever read in the Hellsing archive. PLease please please continue to write and update since it makes my day every time! Now for some fangirl freakout (I apologize but it must be said AAGGGHHH! Wait nooo Alucard and Integra have to be together! That other girl is nice but noooo she and Alucard can't get together and Integra can't get married I love AxI too much for that to happen |
 The Former Sigmund17 4/9/12 . chapter 13Yes, once again an excellent chapter.
Powerful, passionate, moving and funny!
Seemed shorter than the previous ones, but perhaps thats just me.
Love what you've done for Integra, very pleased to see that her fire did go out but those around her were more than willing to throw some fuel back towards her in the stylee of"For gods sake, you are a woman who plays with fire! Now look Integra, you've got two choices and we're fed up of waiting! Now you decide; are you the match or are you the kindling?
Loved the Pip and Alucard bonding create much more depth for both characters and I personally think Pip was getting a bit on the cameo side recently so its good to see him back on the stage for a bit.
Ta. |
 immiD 4/9/12 . chapter 13Aaah, I love this story! You brighten my day with your amazing updates! So pleas update soon and make me happy! hehe.. anyway- absolutely fantastic story, and I cant wait to see how it all turns out! |
 zenbon zakura 4/8/12 . chapter 13if anything its the brother in laws bonding between pip n vlad if they do get their girls
hurry update! |