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Hi 10/31/11 . chapter 1
I will nor degrade your writing with words.
wow 3/14/07 . chapter 1
That was so sad! I was crying throughout it and still managed to finish it. That was just awesome.
Artemis Rain 11/27/02 . chapter 1
Wow. This story was absolutely amazing! You captured so perfectly the love/hate relationship between Potter and Malfoy (all of them). It was so beautiful and so painful at the same time. That's the reason I came looking for Harry Potter fanfic. That's it. Perfect. Nice job.
f0xyness39 8/21/02 . chapter 1
really good...but confusing cuz i couldn't tell who was saying what...mayb it's just me?
one four two nine seven eight 6/7/02 . chapter 1
I really like this sort of Lucius. He should be like Ricky's dad in American Beauty, only being a brat to the kid because he thinks his son will turn out exactly like he did.
If you haven't seen American Beauty already, do so, and you'll know what I mean.
Amalin 4/11/02 . chapter 1
Heart-rendingly radiant! (Look, I use the same adjectives, I'm trying to say something new.) That just...glowed with emotion, beautifully woven from first to last. The shifting POV added wonderfully and your prose as always was absolutely breathtaking. My favorite part was Harry's dream (if it was Harry's?), the "Then, I realized I wanted it to be blood, so I could see that smile on your face." That left me speechless. Once again, your unsurpassed Malfoy/Potter writing leaves me stunned and reeling (in a definite good way). Most beautiful; amazing, glorious, poignant, wonderful job.
bondagechic 4/9/02 . chapter 1
Wow! You amaze me! I've absolutely loved every HP fic of yours that I've read. They are so heartbreaking and full of a dull ache that I find irresistible...Keep writing and I'll keep reading, I promise.
Lix 4/6/02 . chapter 1
That was really, really incredible. Thank you!
Brildane 4/6/02 . chapter 1
Oh. It was beautiful. Lovely. *clasps hands and sniffles* Brilliant portrayal of Lucius.. it's not often that we seem him depicted like this..
Evil Windstar 4/5/02 . chapter 1
cool fic. do more.
Day Baye 4/5/02 . chapter 1
I was a bit confused about what was going on there, sometimes- kept getting everyone mixed up- but your story was awfully good. Loved it!
Mendelssohn 4/5/02 . chapter 1
Fascinating... I never you could think like a 30 year old. Great portrayal of Lucius! Sometimes, I get sick of reading the stereotypical "evil Dracula and his father." Your writing is truly great.
SoulSister 4/5/02 . chapter 1
it was depressing but it was also intriguing. I liked seeing parts of it in Lucius' point of view, you don't see that too often
Minh Tam 4/5/02 . chapter 1
Oh that was sooo sad! James/Lucius is one of my favorite couples, but it is near impossible to find a story on them. Oh well, I'll deal. Anyway, I think you are a fantastic writer. You portrayed the characters so realistically that I actually cried during this fic! I hope you write more soon!
Nymph of Ogygia 4/5/02 . chapter 1
Wow. Give me a moment to recover and I'll try to write a review that decently conveys how blown away I am by this fic.

The way you wordeed everything, the descriptions, the interwoven POVs... It's all amazing! This is probably one of the best romance fics I've read (mind you, I tend not to read romance but this surpasses many of those stories floating around). I like your portrayal of Lucius, too... He's an interesting character, IMHO.
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