Dude, can't you come up with some actual alien names? Why the frip would the aliens have names that are words in earth language? I can think of better alien names off the spot! fourarms-Mrainden, XLR8-Swivich, greymatter-Gryolve, stinkfly-Plyk'Xiv, wildmutt-Snarigg, upgrade-GM(galvanic mechamorph model)46779847811, heatblast-Blizrakge, ripjaws-kroi, ghostfreak-zhagisk. There, much better alien names! At least they're alien (not of human language) names.

! Poor Rakki!

nice but too short, I liked the idea and the start but I think you need to put some more effort on the ending. sorry about the drawback, I'm just trying to help.