cool story i really hope she wasnt cheating on peter. please update soon and what is her secreat? i love ur story -sorry if that nnoyed u-

If she cheated on him I will be mad! Update please!

wheres the next chapter?

Love it! Did she cheat on peter?

Hm. That was interesting.

Great chapter. Oohhh, what other?

It's a bit fast-paced, but other than that really good. Noah seems. . . new. But, hey, whole point of fanfiction, right? Make it your own. He's got potential. Not sure where you're going with him, but I'll just have to see.

Update soon,

Lots of love,-Supermegafoxyawesomehot Allie(:

Valerie's guilty of something! But what? Hm...

That whole "unraveling of the cloak" thing is pretty symbolic, haha. And I'm going to guess that you just foreshadowed here; did Val have a sort of affair with Henry? Hm...

Truth be told, I'm just a bit bored. So far this only seems like a continuation. I hope the plot unfolds soon.

I think the way you portrayed Prudence is about right, though I have to say it kind of contradicts with the end of the movie. Remember, Prudence and the villagers protected Valerie from the wold when on holy ground? Otherwise, interesting.

Hm. Interesting. There are only a few missing words that would make some sentences flow more easily, but otherwise very good.

Great Chapter as always...so...is Noah Valerie's younger brother? I assumed so, or maybe I missed it. I don't know. PLease update soon!

xoxo Region and District xoxo

Oh oh, Valerie has brother. I didn't see that one coming. Love it.

Wow, its been a while since you've updated must admit that I've almost completely forgotten about this story, but you're back and so am I. Dang what a twist. . . Update soon!

Lots of love,-Supermegafoxyawesomehot Allie(: