cool story

Boy, you took forever to update! I almost thought this was a dead fic and you got bored with it. Lucky I was wrong right?

I didn't think that Madoka and Sayaka were gossips so it was sort fun of reading as being silly even though that Kyuubey around them in human form.

But as a fan girl, I am insulted that you would have fan girls walking around in Yugioh hairstyles. Why not purple like Dark in DN Angel?

So I really like how you had the fandoms go against each other over the usage of Kyuubey in human form.

And just so you know I ship NaruSasu. Elitists are jerks who assume that if I am fangirl, then I must not really understand japan and go KAWAIIIIIII like a banshee.

I like your interpretation of the whole Incubator's process and I wonder if you'll have Kyuubey band with the girls and they go to the home planet or something.

Either way, update more often and I'll eventually make a account.

God, connecting all those Beys... that was genious, but please bear on a few other things:

1. Earth is not the only planet they're harvesting. It's around a thousand...

2. Most Incubators are left to thier own devices to fulfil a quota. So why are the Beys being sooo pressured... -_- I mean Juubey's having a good time recruitting 6 girls and a potential goddess... *is referring to Kazumi*

Nice story so far. Some people may complain about Kyubey being OOC but hey, it's a parody so it's fine. Anyhow, I like how Penelope saved Sayaka by removing the grief from her gem. When Sayaka lived again, I was like "Yay! Sayaka's alive again!". I also find it amusing to see Kyubey stressed out, serves him right, the jerk!

Keep up the good work.

Lol Penelope o_O. and LOL Madoka trying to lie. Too awesome!

Penelope is such a Mary Sue wannabe. Again, I would still note how crazy this plot is. And oh OOC points for Kyubey. He does not feel anything. Not even exaggerated surprise or excitement.

Other than those things, everything's fine as is.

I'm glad I came back to check on this.

I got a question...Is Penelope a Mary Sue or not. Normally, Mary Sues don't have any real issues but seeing she'd a alcholic and sleeping with pedophiles.

But then again I don't know what her whole story is about... I guess she's an Magical Girl (Compaired to the other girls) you dropped in PMMM just for the kick of it.

I think I have an idea how this story will end. But before I make my prediction I want to see her in action.

Experimental fic is still experimental.

For now the pacing has tued quite stable, but not you just put OOC points on every character, except Madoka.

Funny, I didn't expect that.

Maybe it's a wreck fic? •nods to myself•

word: experimental fic is experimental.

Hahahaha...! Quite a Fast-paced story...

Lemme add this to the Alerts list.

Very interesting start. )

I'm looking forward to more; hope you update soon.

Experimental fic huh?

Your story sounds interesting and I really want the second chapter!