I laughed so hard when I read the concluding line! It was sheer genius!

I demand more. That is... If it's alright with you... That is...

What bastard decided to teach Fluttershy that kind of language?

This was quite lovely, to say the least. My two favorite characters in the entire show; I love stories about the two of them! However, I must say that I'm kinda confused with it. I mean...did Trixie write that erotic book while living with Twilight? And, if so, why does everyone now think that Twilight is...like that? I mean, she didn't DO anything with Trixie...the silly blue unicorn was instigating it all herself! So, I don't quite understand the whole deal with her book and how Twilight is now suddenly...well, what Fluttershy said.

But, that aside, this was very nice, not to mention quite humorous. My two favorite genres are romance and comedy (humor), and you put both of them into a good story. Twilight's friends' lines were hilarious, Celestia's letter was very cute, Spike was perfectly in-character and adorable as always, and my two favorite unicorns were sexy and amazing like they should be. Oh, and nice cameo by Derpy Hooves at the end, delivering Trixie's book; very nice touch.

There were a few errors here and there, but nothing major or worth pointing out; I'm guessing you just made them from typing too fast or something. So, all-in-all, I'd give this story a 9/10. I wish you would write more, but...well, nice story!

Dude, I'm looking back at my favourite fics and many of them are written by you. Keep it up!

Lol you tagged this as a humor story. I thought it would be more romance.

Definantly cloppable, for what it's worth

I read this for two reasons: I love Progress. And you posted this on my birthday I just now noticed.

Anyways, it was hysterical.

I'm just disappointed there won't be more.

Well. This was most definitely not what I expected out of this story. And it was very entertaining, to say the least.

So, characterizations were pretty well spot-on. Twilight and Trixie were written very well, and I can almost see Twilight's thought processes as she tried to justify Trixie's actions. Spike's suspicion was also great.

The friends, though they only got a small cameo, were freaking great. I loved Pinkie's idea for a coming out party, and Fluttershy's line was so damn good I nearly died laughing.

All in all, this was a great take on a simple premise, and I'm happy to have read it. My only real complaint with your work is that it makes me self-conscious about my own _

Keep up the good work.

Xort

Excellent, as usual. Inspiring.

Great, now I'm also writing a My Little Pony fanfiction.

This thing is infectious. I blame your stories and Fallout: Equestria for

this pony syphilis.

"Even if you are a twisted, bondage-loving masochistic bisexual nymphomaniac, we still love you.
Someone get Fluttershy's voice actor and give her all your money just to read that line.