Great Job! I loved it!

You did an excellent job on this fic, Rachel's character was refreshing, kinda wish I knew what the heck was going on with Riddick after they spent the night together...he didn't even explain! Very rude. Anyway, heard you like PURIFIER fics. Well, i've only read one. It was a Riddick/Jack one, but Jack's personality rubbed off on Vaako and the purifier (Eron)...lets just say it's my fav fic of all time. It was hilarious, had a great plot, the banter between the four of them had me rolling. Take a look at it. It's called 'A Kid Like Her' by criket71 . Story ID number is: 2931978
Rating was M!

Happy reading!
~Nef~

just read it and i liked it actually it really good

Wait, I'm still confused. Why did he dump her out of the bed? You said he was asleep when they tried to arrest him, so he couldn't have done it to keep her safe.

This is a very interesting fic. I've never read a Riddick story before, but this is pretty cool. Though you forgot the name of the slam Riddick had been in. It was Butcher Bay.

My my... I really enjoyed this story and I'm really happy that there's no obvious happy ending... you pleased me with that :) I also liked how the story went smoothly from your original plot to the Pitch Black story. And congrats for having finished a fanfiction, I find it extremely hard to finish one as well :)

Good story, but i wish the ending wound have been, well you know...they should 'ev at least end up together or something...Anyway, t'was well written. Cheers!

wtg

Don't suppose you'd be planning one of them really cool sequel-thingies?

"Just a suggestion but perhaps you should flee!" I love that line-it's my favourite line in the whole movie besides the tagline. But I really like this story a whole lot!

I like it. Not sure wether she should have fallen in luv/trusted riddick so soon, but whatever.

Nicely Done! I truly enjoyed the entire story. Well Done!

Good

m... good

Does Rach settle down and live in a nice little cottage on the Irish country side with some sheep?