it's me again, and again i refuse to point lurk and sayback your chapter cause it's smut but it's amazing as always.

sorry i forgot to sign in, but it's me. I would point and lurk at your chapter, but considering it's all smut i decided it would be kind of akward for me, not for you haha. WRITING CAMP IS SO MUCH FUNN! I'll point and lurk at your stuff later cause it's really quite amazing. I can't believe you held it back from uss!

I got over my fear of akwardness, i'm still only going to point though, which is when you pick out something that stood out to you.

"Is it possible to come just from sound?"

"Physical kate beckett was better than he ever imagined."

"how pwrsuasive Kate could be... allowing her to seduce him."

Really great!

Lurking, for your info is when you ask questions. Like:

"Why is Rick so cocky?"

"It turns him on to have her in control by seducing him, but it turns her on to have him take control too? How does that work?"

And last but not least is sayback, or what i think your piece is saying.

I think your piece is saying that Kate and Rick love eachother and are ready to trust eachother and express there love on a physical level.

Those are the three basic ways of responding. I thought you deserved a good review haha.

I love love love this fic! I love how you've dragged out the heat and the action. You're an amazing writer.

Emm, excuse me. Exactly what happened to the rest of this post? Lol. Seriously, you're killing me leaving it here.

Oh and so glad you're back :)

Sorry you're getting mean reviews. I truly don't know why. I'm enjoying this story, and I've enjoyed the others of yours that I've read. Just ignore the hateful people on the internet. They're not worth the stress and aggravation.

Hello! I just wanted to tell you that your writing style is YOURS, and what other people think don't matter. Just be confident about your stuff:) Be proud because your stories are GREAT! Don't let some riled up comments bring your self confidence down:D

Update soon;) I can't wait for the next chapter!

i missed your stories!don't listen to mean comments, guys are just jealous! welcome back

lol great chapter

i so agree 72 degrees is a little cool for me to

It would be very kind of you if you posted at least one more chapter...

Annie

Hello!

Actually Mi pobrecito means my poor baby...

And YES Stana can speak Spanish. So it's okay to have that in the story. Btw Caskett banter is HOT:D

Update soon!

I really love this story!

Please continue it :)

Chapter 6 ?PLEASE? LOL.

Okay I'm seriously enjoying reading your story LOL. I, too, was shocked when Beckett took his pointer finger into her mouth ;-) ; then him slapping himself across the face? HILARIOUS LOL and the "Where would you like me to pinch you?".

I really like the way you write the story. Even though It's OOC for beckett I , Still can feel like I'm watching the show.

Im really really enjoying reading this ;-)

-BA Spanish, bilingual 30 years. Grew up halfway between NYC and Philly. Former USINS employee.

Not only "poor thing", but "poor LITTLE thing". "Mi pobrecito" "my poor little boy" is another connotation. Wonder whether Big Rick can take it as an endearment or will see it as a challenge?

Not strange at all that Kate would know some Spanish, as an NYC cop who grew up in the city and has at least one bilingual colleague.