This story is great. It's fast paced and runs away with you, it feels like you're going along with Bella for the scenes. I loved the thoughts behind it all, and the just pure madness of it all. It's done perfectly, Bellatrix is perfectly in character, and everything she does seems like something she would really do. The poem that was one of the chapters (6? Maybe 7?) was incredible. Every bit of this story was told the perfect way to really express her and her actions the best.

If someone is looking for the real Bellatrix... It would be in this story! Because it is fuckin awesome!

This is so fucking perfect.

FUCKING HELL THIS IS BELLATRIX

AS;DLKFJAS;LDKFJSA;LDKFJ this is perfect.

i'm linking this on my profile, btw - you have NO CHOICE, because it is the BEST FUCKING THING I HAVE READ ABOUT HER. FINALLY.

xoxo

q.n.

'In just a few minutes you wouldn't recognise your own house, she was that revolutionary. In just a few minutes, you wouldn't remember your first name, she was that powerful. In just a few minutes, you'd beg her to kill you, she was just that convincing.'

Like, wow. This is great, really. It's the same character, the same theme (destruction, insanity and all that) over and over again, but every time it's completely new and original. I love it.

- Julia

This was beautifully written I love the whole thing, you have taken a leap over the line if awesomeness in my book!

These are extremely powerful. I think my favourites are Crystals and Charlie. Well done.

Once more I can't even

Worr this is good. I like your use of parentheses to convey more subtle feelings and ideas. This story is so beautiful.

Can I even

there are no words

So I'll just condense my roiling thoughts.

Firstly, I like the poem(?) that you've made of this chapter; it's lovely.

Secondly, again, the way you write makes me so happy. It's beautiful and transgressive and it makes me smile and my heart beat faster as I read.

I love everything about this

It's all beautiful

This is one of the best written stories I've ever read on ffn. It's beautiful and eloquent and fully in character.

I normally have a huge problem with stories that seek to label Bellatrix as a drug-user because it seems like the writer is taking the easy way out and blaming her madness or some aspect of it on an addiction. I've read a few and they always bother me. But you aren't calling Bellatrix an addict nor are you making her madness drug related, so it's jst a deliciously human tidbit in the fractal whole.

And it's certainly beautifully written; I've rarely seen better. You're certainly very tallented with words. I cannot actually explain how much I enjoyed this. I look forward to reading more!

This is... brilliant. Really, I can't find words to describe this perfectly-in-character, incredibly-thought-out, deep and insightful piece of awesomeness.

This is the kind of sweet, harsh realism we need.

Well, this is interesting and different. First, a couple of language notes. Ignatius doesn't have an o in it, and first-born and eighty-nine need hyphens. Also, I think you mean "the powder in front of her," not "the powder in front of here." While it's clear that things not being quite in proper sentences is an intrinsic part of this piece, this sentence doesn't quite make sense: "It's fully alight, the smoke and the night as she inhales as deeply as she can." This is certainly a curious piece, and I'm looking forward to reading more of it.