|Reviews for just another dreamer|
| jeremybekah 6/9/11 . chapter 1
oh,wow. so beautiful, i loved this especially the amazing imagery
| combeferring 6/4/11 . chapter 1
So, Mad, this is one of the most beautiful freeverses I have ever read. It's so pretty and flows and it's LucyEdmund, so what is there not to love?
I've never actually read a Dreamerverse freeverse before, but this is sososo beautiful and yep. I'm repeating myself ;)
I adored the descripton of how she got there and the ending was so... so...tragically, magically stunning.
Loved this, if you didn't get that already :)
| lonely hands 6/3/11 . chapter 1
This is oh-so very beautiful.
Your wording is stunning; I really loved the description of Lucy's leaving our world and entering Narnia: 'and with a whoosh,
you're in another world.'
The other thing that really stood out to me was the description of her eyes: 'with your eyes like the sky,(but not the British sky).'
I love this pairing already, but I really loved what you did with it. I don't think I've ever read a Dreamerverse freeverse before. (That sounds strangely weird, somehow, lol)
| symphonies of you 6/1/11 . chapter 1
I'm a dreamer, too. So I really liked this because your version of Lucy reminds me of me. Omg, you're so good at freeverse. Good job (again)!
| gote 6/1/11 . chapter 1
Oh my god, Mad, how do you manage to write two of my major dislikes (freeverse and first person) and get me to totally fall in love with it?
You did such a wonderful job, especially through this format, of telling a story and getting so much across in rather few words.
Beautifully written and full of emotions, I really enjoyed this. :)
| claraoswalds 5/31/11 . chapter 1
Whee! LucyEdmund! Just what I needed right before my awaxrctghybjknli,jkhgdfsadf finals! :D
Your descriptions are just wonderful, Idol twinny - especially the mirror! It was gorgeous! And then the descriptions of Narnia and Edmund (*swoon*) and then the princess/peasant thing was just brilliant and - and - and -
WHAT DO YOU MEAN IT ENDED UNHAPPILY?
That's not cool, Idol twinny. :( THEY BELONG TOGETHER.
Anywho, 'twas still brilliant, Mad! Awesome job, and keep writing!
(And an favorite author, because you deserve it! :) )
| courfeyracs 5/31/11 . chapter 1
Mad, this is asfkjfl. There are no words.
Where do I begin? I loved how you managed to tell such a full story in poem format, it was amazing. And Lucy - I lovelovelove your Lucy so much, she's such a dreamer, so hopeful at times.
Also, I really liked how she isn't meant for Narnia, it was such a nice touch.
And of course, your use of formatting and language and imagery is beautiful. Wow.
| janeisnotonfire 5/31/11 . chapter 1
Mad... This was aimyzhieing.
The writing and imagery was so powerful, the effects were amazing, and the writing was purely epicsauce.
Way to put Janeh's freeverse to shame P