oh,wow. so beautiful, i loved this especially the amazing imagery

So, Mad, this is one of the most beautiful freeverses I have ever read. It's so pretty and flows and it's LucyEdmund, so what is there not to love?

I've never actually read a Dreamerverse freeverse before, but this is sososo beautiful and yep. I'm repeating myself ;)

I adored the descripton of how she got there and the ending was so... so...tragically, magically stunning.

Loved this, if you didn't get that already :)

This is oh-so very beautiful.

Your wording is stunning; I really loved the description of Lucy's leaving our world and entering Narnia: 'and with a whoosh,

you're in another world.'

The other thing that really stood out to me was the description of her eyes: 'with your eyes like the sky,(but not the British sky).'

I love this pairing already, but I really loved what you did with it. I don't think I've ever read a Dreamerverse freeverse before. (That sounds strangely weird, somehow, lol)

Just... fab.

I'm a dreamer, too. So I really liked this because your version of Lucy reminds me of me. Omg, you're so good at freeverse. Good job (again)!

muSicLuHvER(:

Oh my god, Mad, how do you manage to write two of my major dislikes (freeverse and first person) and get me to totally fall in love with it?

You did such a wonderful job, especially through this format, of telling a story and getting so much across in rather few words.

Beautifully written and full of emotions, I really enjoyed this. :)

Whee! LucyEdmund! Just what I needed right before my awaxrctghybjknli,jkhgdfsadf finals! :D

Your descriptions are just wonderful, Idol twinny - especially the mirror! It was gorgeous! And then the descriptions of Narnia and Edmund (*swoon*) and then the princess/peasant thing was just brilliant and - and - and -

WHAT DO YOU MEAN IT ENDED UNHAPPILY?

D:

That's not cool, Idol twinny. :( THEY BELONG TOGETHER.

*huffs*

Anywho, 'twas still brilliant, Mad! Awesome job, and keep writing!

(And an favorite author, because you deserve it! :) )

Mad, this is asfkjfl. There are no words.

Where do I begin? I loved how you managed to tell such a full story in poem format, it was amazing. And Lucy - I lovelovelove your Lucy so much, she's such a dreamer, so hopeful at times.

Also, I really liked how she isn't meant for Narnia, it was such a nice touch.

And of course, your use of formatting and language and imagery is beautiful. Wow.

Mad... This was aimyzhieing.

The writing and imagery was so powerful, the effects were amazing, and the writing was purely epicsauce.

Way to put Janeh's freeverse to shame P

Janey xxxxxxxxxxxxx