I love it! Luv Radditz/Khune pairing! BTW, where's Ona? Fantastic, amazing and absolutely breathtaking! You even made me cry when Radditz confessed he loves Khune .. and when Khune died... Write more!

The dino part was soo cute!
It wasn't a bad lemon either!

I'm so liking the Radditz/Khune)

Brilliant so far! Keep up the great work! I'll be reading the rest in the near future.

interesting story, i like this _

what can i say?

i lovvvvvvved it!

this is the best story i have read that was completed. thankyou for spending your time writing it when you could have done other stuff.

rock on!

Not bad! Not bad at all! But with your fan art I would like to see Raditz wearing less.
Keep up the good work!

I do't know what to say but good job. I am stunned and will forever be wounded with the pain of this tragedy. I will be up thinking about this wonderful fiction. The reason I read this is because I am envious of all relationships. Please e-mail me as soon as you get this. I need to chatwit you for a while. Thank you so much.

Bulveta

That chapter was soooooooooooooo good. I really did cry! I have very sensetive emotions and hearing. That was so sad. I am reading all of this but I usually only review at the end. E-mail me.
Bulveta

*dies
i almost cried at the end! POOR RADDITZ *pouts* anywho, i absolutly loved the fic. You did such a great job of portraying raditzy-chan i'm completely obsessed with the saiyajin factor of dbz... (humans... nameks... what are those!) i thought it was great how you managed to tie the story in with the rest of the timeline of dbz (and make it make sense!) anyways, i'm looking foreward to reading the next one ... who is this purple haired dude next to Ona...? who has purple hair in dbz... *hopes*... (... did i mention i am a bit obsessed with trunks too... anyways. It was a great story and i'm rambling.

ja ne!

Cantala

good job well done

this is realy good

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