*squees* ooh i loved that thankss for sharing

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

aw...that's so sweet. i love it...you're so feeding my newfound 5x1 addiction. _ (laurell k. hamilton! Anita Blake! hell yeah!)

Good fic, I love it _

Especially the part that Heero ignores Wufie

*sniffle* Aww...how wonderfully delightful.)

this story was wonderful. if i were you, i would take some of the descriptions you've made, and de-word the paragraphs into poems just for your own use. grammar was great, and the spelling: i have never seen anyone spell meilan's name right in any fanfic. it annoys me so much when tey call her meiran. however, some of the things said could be found in trash teen sex stories. although it workd in this delightful ditty, be careful on those next time you write. you really have a knack for this, keep up the jolly good work!

I loved the poetic way this started! It was so pretty to see all those lovely ways to say usually ordinary and boring things! I wish you'd included a warning about that icky "Wufei loves Meilin" stuff, though! I hate that kind of "Wufei is retroactively bisexual" stuff and I had assumed it was Treize's name he'd been murmuring. At least then Wufei's character here would've been consistent and if he took Heero to bed under him as uke, it might've made more sense since Heero's almost as cool as Treize.

Wooowee this was good! I luved it to bitsles! But Heero as uke, Heero weeping, very OOC *scratches head* Newayz this was a good ficlet even though I tend to keep Wu-Kun as the submissive one Go figure *laughs*

That was really, really good! I almost cried! I hope you write a sequel because I would gladly read it! Bye!_