this is a great story you gotta keep writing it!

oh! DEMETRIA IS MOULDY VOLDY'S DAUGHTER! THIS JUST GETS BETTER!

just finished chap two, the story don't suck, so quit worrying!
keep up the good woprk.

Its not completely stupid. there. ive said it. i just read the first chap and WOW. keep up the good wrork!

Note; It was Bertha Jonkins, not Bortha.
great descriptive writing! i wanna write like u.

pretty _

this is a bunch of I*ing hope you*ing go to a bloody you and it tooooo much*

Thank you again, Akira! Hey, should I release OBLIVION? I dunno if I should. Well, I have a few new stories up. Catch em if you need to! It's Selena you dumb wad! I changed my name.

I enjoyed your story very much.

Great! Keep writing! Try writing longer chapters, say 1000 words in each chapter? Seeya!

Great story!

cool

Demetria's evil? Weird! I never thought a Dursly would be a witch! Kimmy

Lily had green eyes, not James. This was ok. Kimmy

it's a very good story, PLEASE CONTINUE!

it is really good please keep writing