I was wondering how you'd fix it if she actually had been able to stay behind and have a life with Edward.

Excellent job, m'dear!

Pam

I truly enjoyed that ending as well, but completely adored the other ending in the true story. Thank you for this though. It was really well done. I especially loved Edward's letter at the ending. Swoon.

Christy

Aww that so lovely. Beyonf Time is one of my favourite stories now, I prefer it to the Twilight original. I can't wait to read More xx

That sentece "You are mine, Bella, and I am yours…forever." Wow..)

Yeah, reading this in class was stupid, stupid, stupid. I am fighting the tears so hard, but a few have still fallen. The girl sitting next to me must think I'm nuts. Tort law is not meant to be sad, lol.
Anyway, I loved the original ending, but this was amazing! What an idea... it's so clearly well thought out... It makes sense (whoever would have thought anyone would say that about traveling through time?), but most of all, it's beautifully written. Fantastic job, dear. I'm in awe.

aww how sweet!

Wow! Nice parallel timeline you have here. This is a lovely alternate ending. The thought that Bella and Edward get not only their lives together, but also a lasting legacy of descendants that bear their names and resemblances makes me wistfully happy.

this entire story is the best i have ever read. I am not kidding. Call me a loser but i still sometimes go back and read my favorite parts. i should have written a review earlier but i was always so entranced in the story that i never did. But now i must! this is an amazing story and i think your a fantastic writer. Thank you so much for sharing this with everyone.

Lovely poignant. I also prefer the original ending but I enjoyed this too.

I have a confession to make. At some point, while reading Beyond Time, I cheated. I just had to know if she ever made it back to the present. So I peeked. I read a few sentences of the final chapters. It didn't diminish my enjoyment of the story at all, knowing that she made it back to her present time, because I didn't cheat enough to know if any of her travels were real. To me, the fact that this journey of love was REAL is the essence of the story. Bella and Edward forever.

This alt. ending just showcases your talent as a writer. And while I do prefer the original, the moral of the story remains the same. Nicely done. How did you ever write an angst (Turns) when you are a hopeless romantic? LOL.

Always a fan…-sillygoose

Wow. I'm serious impressed that you wrote this alternative for a story that you'd already so fully. I may have cried more than once reading it to. Just seeing their life for what it might have been them together and so passionately in love. Who wouldn't want that for themselves? Keeping the journal was a great idea and that letter Edward wrote... gawd. I'm full of very sappy feelings right now. An interesting alternative, though I'm more than a little partial to the original. Thanks, bb. You're awesome for even finding the headspace to write this! xox

Wow. I'm serious impressed that you wrote this alternative for a story that you'd already so fully. I may have cried more than once reading it to. Just seeing their life for what it might have been them together and so passionately in love. Who wouldn't want that for themselves? Keeping the journal was a great idea and that letter Edward wrote... gawd. I'm full of very sappy feelings right now. An interesting alternative, though I'm more than a little partial to the original. Thanks, bb. You're awesome for even finding the headspace to write this! xox

That was sweet...and confusing. I guess because the Bella that goes back in time had fallen in love with a vampire Edward, thus befriending Carlisle. But if Edward never becomes a vampire, how does that work?
Yeah, your original ending was perfect, though this was a sweet alternative to show the life they build as humans. But the logistics of it is confusing the crap out of me.
Thank you for donating to such a worthy cause. Your generosity helped, I'm sure.

I hate sequels, and unexpected epilogues! They always fuck with your mind! This alternate universe confused me, and it kind of annoyed me too. Not because th plot was bad, because, Jesus, TKegl writing a bad plot? Unthinkable. But I had come to peace with the fact that this story was complete and I had come to terms with it, attempting to dispel the depression I usually feel whenever I read a fic as epic as this, when BANG BANG! a new, incredibly confusing chapter arrives and ruins my piece-making process.
Sigh. The woes of loving Beyond Time.
Great as usual! My last review looks incomplete, but forgettaboutit cause by know you should know that your shit is the shit. Thank you for this.

My head is spinning after all this time traveling
VERY WELL DONE!

Original and intriguing! Raum