OH that was great, please oh please update

SL: OOh...sweet...

SC: Kinda reminds me of "Kid Brother." Don't you agree, SL?

SL: Huh? Oh, yeah. Who did that, anyway?
SC*shrugs* Dunno...Anyway...good story. Real sweet.

that story was cool, kyoji is one of my favorite charecters and this story was very touching so at least in my eyes this was a very good story.

Aw! Great writing and SO sweet! Poor Kyoji...

Wow. This is good. Update soon!

wow that was so good. i love Kyoji and think that this story was so cute. _ i loved it!

Interesting, and a wonderful point of view from a character who sorta kinda didn't get a lot of screen time, even though the story's so much about him.
Very well done!

Had to leave a review for this one, too. 'Cause, y'know, it rules. And as a Kyoji fangirl, it really tugs on my heartstrings...

I'm glad you wrote this. Kyoji is my favorite character, and I'm just sadden by his fate. Unfortunately, so is the number of fics that contain his character. It's very difficult to find him in it and that's very disappointing. Anyway, I hope you'll write another fic containing Kyoji.

This was a GREAT story. It's really touching. I never thought that Kyoji could like his brother so much...
P.S. I HATE Yu-Gi-Oh

*applause* I really dig this. Something about the story being told from Kyoji's POV makes it really appealing... Perhaps because we didn't get much from the real Kyoji during the actual series and were left with only enigmatic words from his shadow?

You already know my sentiments about this fic, but I love the atmosphere you gave it. Noo, Domon! Don't go! ;_; It was both heartwrenching (to me at least) and sweet. Great fic, per usual!