Loved the story, it was nice getting both pov's.

For Ziva, is it officer or agent? Because, I have seen both titles in front of her name.

Great story so far. I look forward to reading the rest of it.

Karma, how we love thy

I had forgotten just how much I had love this fic till i reread it and it seems even better. I love how you put the two idiots in their place. I love how you made Tony team leader and made Gibbs SFA.

O.o that was intense. Am I sensing some true anger? If it isn't, you are doing a damn good job of channeling. Bravo *clapping*

great chapter, great story. i hope that i will see another story from you soon, a fan in ireland,

Great story and great ending although I'm sorry to see it end. I am so glad you didn't allow everyone to be forgiven. We know it will take time for the team to become a real team again.

Nice ending to this story. I really liked how you made it sound like real life and not the "and they lived happily ever after". I find that I do that myself a lot.

One thing I did see while reading this chapter(and you'll probably get a lot of reviews about it) was you used Vance instead of Jenny Shepard. Unless you were thinking about something else when you were ending this very well written story. I liked how everyone was protrayed.

SUPER...i agree, with gibbs...tony should have left it to tim...it had been part of his job that time...LOVE that gibbs got to see, just HOW much tony does...i.e. paper work and such.

GREAT STORY.

alisa

Nice finish, great work! :)

I am sad to see it end. But, that was a good last chapter. I hope McGee and Ziva will appreciate Tony more now.

lol..Gibbs as SFA. I bet that was a tough move. It's nice to know that he cares more about Tony than his own needs and wants. Thanks for a great story and I am looking forward to reading your next one, as well.

GOOD WORK! I enjoyed it greatly. Thank you for finishing the story. Tracy

I love M*A*S*H! That is all :)

no great work, i liked this story. any chance of an epilogue or sequel after the 8 months?

God, I loved that. That has to be the best chapter of all. Loved what he said to those two and Gibbs finally backing up Tony there. Right where it counts. Poor Gibbs stuck doing Tony's SIC work. Yeah, can imagine Gibbs wanting to smack Tony for the looks, smirks, and laughs directed his way. Thank you for such a wonderful story. Looking forward to more stories from you. You are one awesome writer.