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Manda4 1/8/03 . chapter 1
This is looking good. Please do add more eventually. Then again, any story that has Remus Lupin in the opening sequence tends to go down well in my books. But...just as an offhand note, wasn't Sirius at the Potters house as soon as Voldemort attacked? The book certainly implies that he was there, which is how Hagrid received the flying motorcycle.
Anyhow, with some luck, you'll add to this soon.
AngelFly 12/2/00 . chapter 1
good job
Skyflyer - Copyright 2000 9/8/00 . chapter 1
The ways of Fate are mysteries to us, however clever we may be. Knowledge is a source of power. Knowledge can kill.
Princess Kate 9/7/00 . chapter 1
Whoa, Nelly. Tune down the font. I wasn't even able to read this- the large font was way too much.
AngieJ 9/7/00 . chapter 1
Love the etymology!)
PikaCheeka 9/7/00 . chapter 1
Poor Remus...
Colin 9/7/00 . chapter 1
I liked that! It wasn't terrific, but it was very good. One thing...don't you mean "A Short Story by Moony"? Padfoot is Sirius, and Remus was the main character. Other than that...good spelling and grammar, etc...keep it up!
Veralidaine 9/7/00 . chapter 1
Cool story...Tad depressing, but cool just the same...I'll go check out your website, 'kay?
Verbum 9/7/00 . chapter 1
Latin! Right on!
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