i really like how this started out, it's really good. I like her weapon it's very cool and well thought out. Keep updating.

Don't know how to put this. I'll be honest, I was never really entranced. But I will admit that the writing is superb enough to know its not another stupid fanfic with bad writers. The protagonist so far has appeared as a cool girl but then went ahead and becomes almost a damsel-in-distress, but who wouldn't avoid zombies climbing up?

Description's good though and no need in improving grammar but there is one mistake. You meant feat, but you put in feet during Natalie's introduction.

Well, I'm liking Natalia already. Keep up the good work, Mega.

Wow, chap 1 of Vampire Huntress is epic. It kept me on my toes when I was reading it. Can’t wait to see what happen next!)