This poem is very beautiful.

And alas, another great poem about the tragic death of Evie O'Connell in TMR. I could relate her statements to the death of Padme in ROTS. It's every mother's plea, "I want to watch them grow", "I want to watch them live". I'd say A on that one. Yay for Rachel Wiesz, the actress who best portrays her.

TTFN,*Padme*

Short and very sweet! I loved both of these poems, both Rick and Evie's POV's...hopefully we'll be seeing more from you soon!)

I like how you used the sets of three, repetition, and included Alex and Jonathon as an important aspect of her life. I think the movie downplays the signficance of Evie and Jonathon's relationship in TMR. Perhaps you might want to vary your sentence structure at times though, and incorporate more action verbs. Overall, good job. Keep writing.

Very sweet.

That's really touching.. you could make more from Alex and jonathan's POV

It's lovely. It sums up the feel of the scene in the movie very nicely. Keep up the good work)