I like this! I don't usually like Nefertiri stories, but this was really really good. Nefertiri nodded, "Please promise me you will make him pay." It was interesting that line, that Nefertiri had a part in Imhotep's punishment. And how she misses her father so much, it sort of shows like another side to the whole thing. good job!

This is an excellent work. It kept me on the edge of my seat, though it left me yearning for more!

Great little story, lol, which wasn't pointess. I really liked the fact that you had Nefertiri reach her father before he died, nice touch. Good job!)

i like this...she as pharoah...very cool.

That wasn't pointless. You did real good interpretating a princess feelings. You can even make another chapter as she marries somebody like Rick in the future. I don't know. Or you can just leave it like it is. It is perfect either way.)

Very good little story. It's good to see what Her thought were after her father was killed

I liked it a lot.