| Reviews for Eye of the Storm: Wild Card |
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Arrowhead1996 1/4/13 . chapter 21Poor Weave! I nearly started crying when I found out what that dik'ut did to him. |
LanceCorporalBickers 11/16/12 . chapter 17I love your story so far but a couple of things i want to add so you might take into consideration, and some things you may want to change! and just to let you know i am not critisizing you or your story :) 1. Assajj Ventress is not a human she is a Dathomirian 2. I am dying for a good story for Gree/Luminara one that would explain the kind of spark they have for one another in this chapter in the story, and i think it would give the story more effect if they had a love/sex scene in it. Not like one of those crappy porn stories, but more or less the way two people feel when they are madly in love with one another! 3. The way you write makes me very happy, considering the fact that your story is one of the most realistic stories i have read or seen on this site! So keep up the good work laloga! |
Kelana-ti 3/19/12 . chapter 20Wow. I love the characters, and am really looking forward to reading the next story! |
Scarlet Rabbit 3/4/12 . chapter 19I'm surprised that they haven't tried to remove the thing from Weave, which you never really went into detail about. |
Scarlet Rabbit 3/4/12 . chapter 18Yoda's just to awesome for his own good. |
Scarlet Rabbit 3/4/12 . chapter 17I like how you hinted at some Gree/Luminara. I can see some chemistry. I do believe that some clones are being used as slaves, but the ARCs and commandos seem to do as they please. Poor Weave :( |
Scarlet Rabbit 3/4/12 . chapter 16Well Gree and Stone are getting along.. Some what.. Kinda. I agree poor Weave. |
Scarlet Rabbit 3/4/12 . chapter 15Well... That was pretty cool of the kaminoan to let the clones go free. |
Scarlet Rabbit 3/4/12 . chapter 14Nice armor, sounds like you got the idea of Obi-wan's armor. I hope they get to Stone and the rest soon |
Scarlet Rabbit 3/4/12 . chapter 13Looks like Creon Dai is planning on escaping again. I can't help but wonder what exactly did the good doctor do to Weave. Stone going to the dark side would be interesting. |
Scarlet Rabbit 3/4/12 . chapter 12Poor Weave. |
Scarlet Rabbit 3/4/12 . chapter 11Oh snap Ventress and Creon Dai know Stone can use the force, I wonder what she's going to do to him. |
Scarlet Rabbit 3/4/12 . chapter 10Well the monkey is out of the bag and Luminara and the clones of Shadow Squad now know that Stone is different then them. |
Scarlet Rabbit 3/4/12 . chapter 9See Kalinda has formed an attachment to Stone and the others and now that's all she cares about. No wonder jedi say attachment is dangerous. I do wonder what Luminara is going to do about the missing clones. I have been enjoying this story... Just had to say it, encase my reviews said different. |
Scarlet Rabbit 3/4/12 . chapter 8Stone should really keep his mind on the droids trying to kill him and not Kalinda. That sucks that he along with some of the others got captured. |