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   stenomommy83 6/1/11 . chapter 1That was a great story! |
| caressa28 6/1/11 . chapter 1 Wow, a very nice start to a story that Im sure Im gonna you never disappoint. Thanks for posting. |
| KayPanda 6/1/11 . chapter 1 What a great story! Thank you for sharing! |
| redheadcarol 6/1/11 . chapter 1 Oh my Gosh! This is such a sweet story! I loved it! I loved the several uses of the number "two" throughout the story. Great job! |
| Vivi H88 6/1/11 . chapter 1 really sweet story ) a little sad but great) |
| Merina Green 6/1/11 . chapter 1 THAT was a wonderful, sweet story! Just what I needed this afternoon. I'm glad the need to write hit you! |
| ConfederateWidow 6/1/11 . chapter 1 Aw, I loved it! D |
| sweetmel21 6/1/11 . chapter 1 Very cute story. |
| ThirteenXSeventeenXNineteen 6/1/11 . chapter 1 Oh my God! I absolutely love this. I didn't notice any mistakes, if they even existed. You're an amazing author. The repition of two at the end of each little section was amazing. I groaned at first when I saw how long it was, but now I'm beyond happy I took the time to read this. It was phenomenal! |
| BigBro'sAlwaysWatchin 6/1/11 . chapter 1 I love it! It was a complex tale of emotions and memories all wrapped up in one little story. *sniffles* And it had a happy ending, so I give it two thumbs up. Well done! |
| Twisted-Twilighter 6/1/11 . chapter 1 I love, love, love your little story. Its absolutely beautiful! |
| Vendell 6/1/11 . chapter 1 Oh Sweetness, I loved this o/s. Good job. I know alot of what Bella went thru and my heart totally went out to her and Jasper. So very happy they had their HEA. Charlie and Renee were both really great with everything. Thank you for not makin Rose a bitch to Bella but understanding and still her friend. Hate the way Jasper found out about Kale but so very glad he did. Looks like Renee's sickness was a blessing in disguise. |
| TheLyricalCutie 6/1/11 . chapter 1 Either I am exteremly hormonal or your just that good. My eyes got all damp reading this. It was beauiful and so freaking real. Renee dying reminded me of my mom. Love it |
| Sushi loves Whitlock 6/1/11 . chapter 1 I don't usually read AH stories but given this was a OS and I haven't had the chance to read more of your story, I figured "why not?" Loved the snippets and the way time moved on. There was emotion and pain and heartache as the story progressed. I was close to getting teary eyed as they finally saw each other after so long. Great job with this. Thank you |
| luvkiss1973 6/1/11 . chapter 1 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww damnit girl u made me cry and i actually liked renee in this one wtg awesome story thanks for sharing |
