Hmmm. This is quite interesting.. not many people make fanfictions about this series and I happen to adore it... please continue to update!

This is an awesome start! I can't wait to see where it goes, please update soon. :D

kool story so far.i'm surpised there is onlly alittle fanfiction on 't wait to read the rest when u update.

Good keep writing id like to see where your taking this :)

These books are so underrated... :( :( :(

Anyway, this sounds really good! :)

It was very interesting view, although I'm not sure if you're trying to sound exactly like C.P. or not because Thirst is written in the present tense the whole time. Was a little confused at first about when the story took place and how she knew Rama was turning into a vampire. I would definitely like to see more, however.