 Natgel 4/23/02 . chapter 1i like that one, like he always say reboot every time, it's really great |
 Water Mist 4/7/02 . chapter 1 I like this! That was short and sweet. It's a good piece of writing. The emotions are written very well. Matrix is my favorite character so I really liked this story! Great Job! |
 samarai bunny 4/6/02 . chapter 1 Awesome Fic dude ! |
 Brenren 4/6/02 . chapter 1Very nice work, Tris. It's almost like the stages of life. Learning from mistakes and then gradually accepting what you are.) |
 AgentRedgirl 4/6/02 . chapter 1 I think this is a very well done piece about the inner Matrix. Well done! |
 Leivi 4/6/02 . chapter 1Hey Trisana, you've done it again I have chills lol. This is so good it's untrue. You can really hear Matrix when you read this! Keep on writing, looking forward to your next chapter of Divide, Render, Conquer too. |