And rightly so. This was our favorite Astro Boy's time, his place, his story to tell, and I'm glad that things worked out the way it did in MTC. Maybe that was what it took to make John see that he'd lost something in the UT's, and he should start thinking of what made him lose it, trying to gain it back, etc.

Well written, and you got a clean shot at what John could ahve thought afterwards. Awesome job!

Excellent Far Anya, you have gone to the heart of the character and created something beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Ali D)

kinda repetative, but good none the less

What was "my fate, I accept" supposed to mean? That someday John would evolve into Future Crichton, I guess. But that was just a bad title. I don't know. I think this deserves a 6 on the rating scale. Good, but not great. I've been having such a hard time with titles latley!