*cries*! This was heartbreaking to read! You can feel every bit of compassion and love in John's words, ones that i can hear him saying aloud. BEAUTIFUL, just absolutely stunning! You should feel proud of your talents!

can I say AW! cuase that was really cute! Well writen! i loved it!

This was a really good, extremely touching story. It really came from the heart. I also liked how you kept John in character-something that not many stories of this type accomplish. Keep writing!

Very good. I like it.