I actually like this format for now...I don't see any reason for a narrative at this point. You're doing a fine job. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

TMOT

ARFGSTDYYSGTDLIU, EVERY TIME I READ ONE OF THESE LETTER BASED CHAPTERS I GET ALL GIDDY AND HAVE A SMILE ON MY FACE THE WHOLE TIME I'M READING.

It's like watching a love story unravel right in front of me through letters. And yes, I am reading them on your blog too. It's so cute. They both seem like such beautiful people.

Who is giving you grief in a review that's making you question what you're doing?

I WILL CUT A MOTHER-EFFIN' BETCH. TELL DEM YO AUSSIE, NINJA SKILLED, PITCHFORK CARRYING PROTECTOR WILL KICK THUR ASSSS. AIGHT? CAPICHE?

KBYE. LOVE YOU. XX

Thanks for answering the questions we wanted to know. And there is no way I can bow out now. I need to know what's going to happen. I like that this story is different & your idea of reading the letter in that format. It's pretty cool. So until next time.

The answers to Bella's questions should be enlightening.

Interested to see where this goes.

Heading over to check it out on the blog, I actually think that the handwriting would be cool!

Love it!

Till next time...

bnjwl

I REALLY think you should add some content to the story, some context to their situation and stuff, it's too short and it really doesn't feel like a story. We want to know more cause the idea is great but it's kind of empty.

I really like the start of this, sorry I've waited a couple of chapters to write I wasn't sure to start. Are you going to update often? Is it all going to be read through the letters or just to start with?

Please keep going it's nice to have a different type of story. :)

Edward seems desperate for some outside interaction and it's nice that Bella can provide it. What did Edward do to end up in prison? Will that be revealed? Great story.

I love the letters back and fourth to eachother. You are very talented!

Already love it! Cant wait to see where this is going

I hope this doesn't sound too cheesy, but this letter perfectly showed the awkwardness of getting to know each other without actually being able to get to know each other - you know what I mean? I loved it! Left me wondering why exactly Edward is doing time...

.."your inside man Edward". It's kind of amazing how just writing this letter you make this man so alive. Lonly, regretful, insecure, strong and tender somehow. Ooza this is amazing. Is there a thread for this story? I want to talk about it with other people. Simple and beutiful. Thank you for the update. Xxx

Really looking forward to getting to know these characters as they get to know each other.

UGDSIGFHISRJ THIS IS SO CUTE, OMG.

How is it that you can get me so captivated and make my heart melt with everything you write? You are seriously too amazing. I LOVE YOU xxxxx