|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Renewed Fight|
| favfantasy1 8/4/11 . chapter 1
Please upload soon! I love time travel fics and this one has a lot of potential!
| tlc 6/6/11 . chapter 1
good start! i love these kind of stories!
| griffin blackwood 6/3/11 . chapter 1
| dbzgtfan2004 6/2/11 . chapter 1
This is a good story. Please continue. Harry and Hermione forever.
| Flamegirl5500 6/2/11 . chapter 1
Welcome to Fan fiction I like how this story is starting out and I am looking forward to reading more of it. Please update when you can.
| JazzGirl123 6/2/11 . chapter 1
Sounds promising. Please update soon!
| Alice's-twin101 6/2/11 . chapter 1
CONTINUE! i love harmony shippers and when harry or hermione go back in time to get together, i love those stories, and i havent seen enough of them so pleeeeeeeeezzz continue. (puppy dog eyes)
| Artur Hawkwing 1 6/2/11 . chapter 1
Could be good. All I have to say is to be careful not to make Harry over powered. Yes he has a truckload of memories but you can still give him the memories without making him over powered. If you acheve this I think you might have a great story on your hands.
| Monnbeam 6/2/11 . chapter 1
You have grabbed my attention with this very interesting start. Looking forward to reading more
| pawsrule 6/2/11 . chapter 1
Good start. I hope Harry doesn't become super Harry, but is human and makes mistakes-goes for Hermione too. Hope it moves along also. Alot of times they drag through the early years and never get to the later years. I like the romance so I look forward to them getting older. Looking forward to next update.
| Firemnwnb 6/2/11 . chapter 1
Good story update soon
| Cuervo Blanco 6/2/11 . chapter 1
It is a good start. Now we had to see how things play out.
pd: sorry for the short review, but i prefer to read another pair of chapters to writte an accurate feedback
| badkidoh 6/2/11 . chapter 1
Well I like it so far.
| worlddada2000 6/2/11 . chapter 1
I really good start to this story. Your choice of genre and theme has been done so many times now, that it really feels too boring to read them, but you have started well and maybe just maybe bring new excitement to all "harry dies and go back to fix and marry hermione" genre and renew my faith in fanfiction again.
I look forward to next update. Please do me one favor, (if you can), please do not over exaggerate characters' evil or goodness, many writers, especially when writing similar theme to yours, tends to make many character either too smart or too dumb, for example, Dumbledore is a MOB, we all know that, but he is a so smooth and conniving manipulating old dodger, that people who have read the canon believes him to be good Grandfather figure. But when they rewrite him, they either make him way too obvious with his manipulation or makes him extremely dumb and scared of harry.
So please try not to do like that. However it is your story so all i can do is advice and plead (lol), rest is up to you.
But so far i really like it. Just don't rush through it. That is another thing that many writers do and also do not take too long to make your point. I have read stories with thousands of words explain only few details. keep it balance and you will get a lot of positive review.
Best of luck and look foward to reading your next update.
| Red Phoenix Dragon 6/2/11 . chapter 1
A good start but it would not be nice to Hagrid to loose him in Diagon Ally as he will go straight to Dumbledore. It may be more funny to punish and obliviate the Dursleys to not remember Harry at all and have him escape to Hermione's home and take her and Luna to school in the US. Hagrid would be in a panic that Harry has disappeared and has been missing for 10 years and was out of Dumbledore's control. Then Dumbledore will have to work hard to find Harry and try an control him if he could.
Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon.