O, this was a really great fic! A few things tho: one was I saw a few grammatical errors here and there, nothing big, but still, beta reading might have helped. andthe other thing was that i wish you went ALL THE WAY through "A Human Reacion", not just until Aeryn, D'Argo and rygel landed. It would have been really cool to see Aeryn's perceptions of Earth and how she felt trying to fit in. Otherwise, everything was great! Hope to read more of your work!

hey this was great i only just read it,
you should have done more to the stroy,
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That could have honestly been what had happened.)

This is good! I hope you are planning a sequal.