Amazing story! Please write aother

That was probably the best Diadem story I have ever read that was written by a fan. It was almost as good as the original series. It was the perfect balence of action, magic, drama and romance. I can't really think of much else to say but WOW. You should definatly write more stories like this.

pretty good. very well written. i liked how it was mainly serious, but there was a touch of humor in it as well to lighten the mood a bit. crow could have used a wee bit more character development, but otherwise, it was great. good job.

p.s. regarding your note on chapter 17, ignore whoever it was that trashed your religion. those people are just looking for something to complain about. i'm an atheist, and the refrences to god didn't bother me one bit. not all of us are idiots like that, don't worry.

Amazing. And like the Diadem Books, everything tied together in the end. Bravo!

I friggin luv ur story! It's flippin awesome! You should write a sequel, I would try to write a fanfic. but I'm a horrible writer unless its horror and even then not very good! :') so horrible but you should seriously write a second one! I've read your other fics and their good too just thought I should say!

:-D

I have yet to read this, (Just saved it to Microsoft Word) but will give you my opinion when it's done.

Liked the first 3 chapters though.

omg! dat was so gud! plz rite more asap!

Amazing story! Write another over the summer please. Your a gifted author and have a lot of potential.

Holy crap... that was... beautiful. I wandered into this section on a whim and I doubt that I will ever forget this story. I don't know if you still write, but I plan on checking out the rest of your writing, after this. Thank you for writing something as beautiful as this, it is a wonderful gift to all those who read it.

Wow. What could I say about a lovely story such as this? Just... wow. I haven't enjoyed a fanfic like this (in any catagory) in nearly a year. It's inspired me to think about writing my own Diadem fanfic p Great job on EVERYTHING; you're truely a great writer.

ellen i really liked the story as a whole but personaly i think the ending might need some thing more im not shure, like what happend with Score,Helaine;Pixel,Amaruit. but i other wised liked it very much(please write a seaquil)

Hehehe... me again, sorry to bother you, but seeing as you are (or were) a

huge Diadem fan, peel is coming out with a new book, "The book of war".

Finally.

-jake Grim

Jakengrim

Fireball6c4t (aim)

Beautiful. Sad to see it end. Hope you keep writing.

Wow. Absolutely amazing story. I loved it from beginning to end.

perfect 10's! love it